• Published 8th Jan 2016
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A Diamond, in Rough Seas - Ponyess



From the top of the world at her party, to the depths of Tartarus overnight is what came to be for the filly named Diamond Tiara. How was she to know; the one throwing her party, is the very same mare who threw her into the pit?

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Comments ( 2 )

Good to see DT showing some responsibility, towards her new sister.

6875508 She may have been a horrible bully in the past, but there is some light and hope in her heart.

Snatching the one ray of hope and going with it feels like a good lead for the story, particularly in the light of where this story came from and where this adventure begun.

Personally, I prefer the happier stories over a more missery ridden story as well.

Now I just hope I can ballance the sides into a good and intersting story, while giving room for all the dark troubles some readers like to see mixed into stories.

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