A Commission? From Princess Celestia?! For the Harvest Festival?!?!?! There is no way he can decline, but by the time he reaches Canterlot, there are no vacancies left in town. Celestia is kind enough to refer him to a "lovely" Hostel in a town called Ponyville, but... He doesn't know anypony there. What will he find there?
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You have a wonderful writing style, but you seriously need to shorten your paragraphs to make your work easier to read. Some people have a difficult time reading such large paragraphs on a computer, hence why many writers tend to follow a more simplistic formatting style.
Shoot! Only 4 views and I've already got 2 downvotes?
720765 Oh, I see. I guess my writing style would work better if I were a paperback writer.
I quite understand, and wasn't sure what people would think about my stories being formatted more like a book, so I decided to leave it be and wait for feedback. 
Oh, I have a request!!! If you thumb down my story, please at least leave feedback, tell what you didn't like about it so I can determine whether it's something I can fix. Otherwise, I'll be just like "I just don't know what went wrong!"
(I can't believe they don't have more derpy faces.)
720974 i see your enjoying the site very well, and dont get to down about downvotes, learn from what people do tell you, and go off that.
Sorry for the misaligned chapter names. I decided this was gonna get too long before Cherry Pie actually got to Canterlot, since I wanted to make the chapters not be too huge of a difference in size. I assure you the REAL name of the chapter is Family Reunion.
Sorry, there were a lot of mistakes that fell through my proof reading. Once I caught enough of them, I decided to edit the story and fix them. No new chapter, unfortunately.