Fluttershy didn't show her best side during the Grand Galloping Gala at all. But why did she behave the way she did and how would her friends react to it? Will they still be her friends and what will she do to cope with it herself?
Warning:
I'm not a native speaker and I do some (or more a lot ) grammar mistakes and my wording is a little bit crude.
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This is accually very good, I must say even better than mine. I totally understand you, I am aslo not Naitive and my first fic was hard to write, I had lots of critics but I kept on writing, tell you what: If someone critics you, don't give up! keep writing and improve on as much as you can
Keep it up!
I had to delete some fics here because I'm not a native speaker too.
Who doesn't love
Ratnap did you draw that pic of fluttershy screaming if you did i am IMPRESSED
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Yes I did draw it myself, thanks for the praise, but it isn't difficult for me to copy some work I have in front of me (I just looked for a picture of her and draw it) I have more troubles to draw pictures where I don't have any references
Why do non-native speakers always seem to be able to use English so much better than most native speakers?
Maybe the added difficulty means you actuall put some effort into it, unlike some lazy writers out there. 
There are still a few mistakes a native speaker wouldn't make, but they're all minor.
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Thank you for the compliment, but there are quite some skilled writers around here and compared to them my vocabulary simply lacks the colourful explanations
Nevertheless I'm graced with your comment