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All of the female students in Canterlot High have been invited to a specialist childcare course. The aim of the course is to teach the students how to look after babies.

However due to cuts in the school budget, the students won't be getting any dolls to practice with. Instead, they're going to be doing something a little more practical...

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Inspired by "Wrist".

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 70 )

Hello readers.

If there's any problems with this story, such as spelling, grammar or story inconsistencies then please respond and let me know. I'm always willing to improve my stories through user feedback.

Thank you.

So far so good. I can't wait to see more of this. :yay:

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Thanks for the comments. I'm glad you're both enjoying the story.

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I'm sure you'll get to see what the younger students are doing during a future chapter or two.

YES! So much potential! Will you make more?

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I'm planning to write around seven to eleven chapters.

:rainbowlaugh: So hilarious! Faved and thumbed-up! :pinkiehappy:

I hope Sunset does the sensible thing and uses her diary to contact pony Twilight

"Dear Twilight,

I don't mean to alarm you, but there's this really weird new teacher who's making us wear diapers. Do you know of anypony named "Chrysalis" on your side of the mirror>

PS, are you sure that your world's Cranky Doodle Donkey isn't an evil tyrant king? I'm just saying, he gives a LOT of homework."

I Can only say that I hope this story continues. The first chapter seems promising enough. When do you plan on posting more?

You know what my reaction to all this would been...
"Screw this! I'm going home!" Then I'd walk out of the room with a fist held high going "Wooo! Week off!"
Seriously, with a choice of this or musical sex-ed, I'd just stay home all week. Childcare and sex-ed are barely even classes anyway, it's not like you'd fail the school year because of them.

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I'm sure much like the other occurrences in the Equestria Girls world, Sunset and her friends will have to check if Chrysalis is actually a changeling in disguise before writing a code red to Twilight.

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I'm planning to write future chapters very soon. They're going to be 3,000 to 5.000+ words long so it'll be some time before they're uploaded to the site.

6788132 I don't mean that Human Chrysalis might be magical or supernatural, I mean that they want to know what Equestria-Chrysalis's personality is; is she an unconventional ally, a reformed villain, or just a straight-up bad guy? While magical powers don't cross dimensions, personalities do, so that might help them know what they're dealing with.

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The duck did I just read.

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I'm pretty sure "your parallel self was evil" isn't enough to convict someone. Chrysalis's motivations were a bit vague anyway. I'd hold judgement until she starts singing her evil plans.

bravo i like where this is going:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::twilightsheepish:

No. Just no on every conceivable level.

I think Rarity's getting a little too much enjoyment out of Rainbow Dash's predicament.

Dash sure likes her pacifier if it has that much of an effect on her already.

6803827 Or she just lacks the desire to pop it out whenever it's inserted.

This was a great chapter to read it probably took forever to make with the prereading and spelling checks and what not. Keep up the good work.

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I'm sure there's a reason why Rainbow Dash has acquired a sudden liking to her pacifier. Also, have a picture of Baby Fluttershy that I found.


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Thanks for the comment. As for pre-reading and spelling checks, I use Microsoft Word to write my stories. I use the spelling and grammar checker as I write the story along.

I still go back and re-read through the chapter a few times once I've written it to check for any more errors the program didn't pick up.

You are a talented writer and this story is going good so far.

I am worried about Rarity though. Everyone else is being sympathetic to the difficulties faced by their partner. If Rarity just enjoys Dash's discomfort then she is just a bad friend. Its one thing to giggle and think its cute. But she ought to help her friend through this and not make it harder for her. If Rarity doesn't provide emotional support then she is just kinda a b****.

I don't wanna wind up disliking Rarity. This is obviously hard for Dash. Even with what appears to be an enchanted pacifier I guess?

In any case its just a comment. I am intrigued by what you have so far and am interested in seeing what you come up with next.

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Thanks for the comment. I'm always trying to improve my writing style for the enjoyment of the readers, so please, if there's anything wrong with my style then feel free to point out during the future chapters.

As for Rarity, I know she appears a little mean so far in the story by not exactly understanding Rainbow Dash's situation and how embarrassed she feels. but it's going to be explained in the future chapters. Seeing as how they're inside a Childcare class, I'm sure Rarity will learn about understanding her little one's feelings throughout the week.

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Cool, I look forward to it.

It seemed for a min like she was being mean, what with her not giving the skirt back so that way RD got embarrassed in order to save Rarity the embarrassment of others maybe thinking she was the baby. If Rarity knows that it would be embarrassing for her to be seen as the baby then she ought to know that the same applies to Dash. But instead she kinda publicly shames Dash to save herself. That's not careless, that's mean and selfish.

But the only reason I even care is because you made me care. You're a good writer and you have me invested. So rock on. Keep it up. Whatever you do I look forward to it.

I'm just curious about something, is there a part missing from this section or was this just a slight mistake

It was then where Rainbow Dash had the chance to remove the pacifier from her mouth. She moved the nipple out of her mouth and made a loud popping noise. Her expression of relaxation quickly reverted back into a sour look of frustration.
“Let’s just get this week over with!” Rainbow Dash continued to pout, mumbling from behind her pacifier. She walked towards the cubicle door and left as quick as she opened the door, leaving Rarity behind to pick up the remaining baby supplies.

So she just took the pacifier out and suddenly it's back in?

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I'll see what I can do and fix it.

Thanks for pointing out that error.

Well considering that equestrian magic creature that we know of that got to that world where the dazzling , I doubt chysalis is evil or had powers Becuase that magic is from equeatia , and I doubt she has some device like from equeatia games (how the heck did earth twi know how to build a device is beyond me )

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Yeah I can't really critic well but I'll say I'm drawn in . One fic with a childcare class kind of fell into in infinite hiatus so yeah tracking this one

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Thanks for enjoying my story.

Which other story had a childcare class?

6830630 www something I about the cmc and high school but like I said it got dropped befor the plot even started

Great story so far, can't wait for future chapters.

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Thanks for reading. The third chapter should be released before the end of January.

Applejack seems to be a little hesistant about being a mother, but I guess anyone would find a big baby like Pinkie Pie to be a handful at first.

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Not only that, it probably feels strange that she's in this position to begin with. I'm sure once she figures out a way to work with Pinkie Pie then she'll be more acceptive of her role.

This doesn't seem legal. At all.

Why am i reading this?

6860045 I don't know , I mean logic would seem that if chysalis needed the lounge she need permission from Celestia and not in a vauge way.

Is cute how dash is liking her paci wither rhaf natural or just something at work but still don't see his this chysalis would automatically be evil and have magic big wh will we I guess

6874146 I mean this whole thing in general

6860913 I was asking myself the same question when I started

When does the next one come out!?????

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The fourth chapter is going to be released sometime in early February.

Glitchy, awesome work

I enjoyed this chapter let's see what the next chapter will be like.

Hey... that's pretty good!

Really though. I know I haven't commented previously, but I have been following this story pretty diligently. It's very prudent and cute and I think it's a good example of what makes your style so enjoyable to read! That being said, I look forward to reading more. Good luck! :twilightsmile:

If this happened at our school I'd be picked last with the fat bully with a face full of pimples and he'd make me the baby

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There's been several delays regarding the latest chapter. I've been forced to reformat my computer after a bunch of problems appeared and I'm in the process of redownloading my writing programs back. I should be going back to regular writing very soon.

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Thanks for commenting, Oliver. I'm always glad to see you enjoying my stories. I've got a lot of ideas that I want to try out and different scenario's for the Humane Six. Can't wait to write them down.

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Is this back on schedule yet or are you still recovering stuff?

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