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The Conflicted Writer


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While this story is not intended to be a fetish story, it does contain ponies in diapers, and slight mention of them using these diapers. If this is something that bothers you, I ask that you either try to enjoy the story despite these things, or simply do not read. My intention is only a sweet, silly, cuddly story.


High Tide lives a quiet life by the sea, pleasantly existing day by day as he scrounged the ocean waves for treasures and nick-knacks. Not a whole lot happens, but that's fine. There's nothing in his life to complain about, and everything is fine.

Then, one day, he sees a mare playing in front of his house, splashing and bouncing in the surf. He watches, mezmerized, but how much fun she's having, and by that strange suit she wears, making her look like a dolphin, or an orca. She's hypnotic, aluring, different, new. His routine is gently shaken just by her being nearby.

Seeing her every day for a while makes him want to go up and talk to her, get to know her. And he finds he wants to talk to her more. Life becomes even better when he makes a friend as nice as Gabby.

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Comments ( 14 )

This is such an adorable and cute story! I absolutely love it! This is definitely being favorited!

Damn i really enjoyed reading that. Took me 2 days of on and off reading but I enjoyed it. Especially Gabby, her character is very good. Though I wish we could find out who Gabby's dad is.

I really enjoyed this story a lot. Gabby is an adorable charecter that makes you want to care for her. Although i am curious about who her real father and mother are! Oh well it leaves room open for a sequel i guess

I read it on FA and I really loved it, the process of the stallion coyly approaching the Gaby and grow a paternal relationship between the two, I though it was very sweet. I like all the detail of description you put in it, despite the length of the story. I would have loved to see what when on with Gaby's other parents but I think it was best that it wasn't shown for this story, I loved how you presented the all he characters they were all so well described and the story was neat too. I hope you will make sequel to it or maybe an off shoot of this story. I hope you will come back here more often.

This fic is super adorable.

I remember reading this three years ago and loved it. I had hoped to find it again, but you hid it away soon after. Seeing it here makes me happy, and Gabby is such a cutie. I even remember drawing her with Kitsuna in their orca and shark suits, padding included.

As for sad stories, I know mine is kind of going down a dark road for Mindset, but it's one that she does need to follow if she ever wants to overcome her own sadness. Plus the regression story won't end like most others would; I promise the readers will find a truly happy ending for her.

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I feel it's important to reply to this; I'm perfectly okay with stories that have sad stuff in them. My latest story (which is not pony related at all) has plenty of sads. But it's gots lots of happies, too. It's not trying to wallow in the sadness, and that's when it irks me, when people try to make a situation sadder and angrier than it needs to be. I'm sure you're doing you're best to get it right, and I hope you do. I just want to be clear, I don't fault sadness at all, I just think as a whole, we need more smiles.

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Okay, now that I can understand. We already have enough stories that get depressing. (Just look at Shadow the Hedgehog. That's a game that has so much edge and darkness that it physically cuts through you... In more ways than one, unfortunately. And that's only the story, I'm not talking about the game's actual mechanics, which are also bad.) But yeah, my story isn't going to be wallowing in sadness. Even I don't want an ending like that.

That is absolutely adorable!

Also, I think that Gabby's parents are actual merfolk. I mean hide and seek in a kelp forest, petting orcas and the fact that they have to dive into the ocean to meet them seems to point in that direction.

This is a lovely story :twilightsmile:. I appreciate your approach of having no negativity for a change, just lots of cuteness and happy times.

You made me want to try wearing an Orca suit of my own by the end :derpytongue2:.

This has been on my list of things to read for a while. I'm glad I finally got around to it. It was very sweet, and I enjoyed it

Sequel?
I want to see more High Tide and Gabby love.

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