6750845 Here here Living, this story is awesome

I myself liked this story who cares what other people say

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Thanks ^^

please continue with celestial being incredibly motherly

Hmm... The bit with Discord seemed rushed. Considering his character, it's out of character for him to be so upfront and helpful when Twilight is in such an 'Amusing' predicament.
Overall it's good, but the side characters all seemed like secondary inclusions and not well characterized, possibly falling victim to the unique journal log framing device which hampered real dialogue.

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Can't really defend my case there. The side characters were written as side characters. I didn't put much effort into writing Discord, Pinkie, or Spike. I tried to characterize Celestia though, hope at least that part was good.
It might feel rushed because I wanted to wrap up the story on Day 6.

Eh not sure why I read though it all but eh have a like

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Thanks for the like.
Are you Canadian? :D

And so, Rar Twilight's friend, never got her problem solved, She messed herself in front of Canterlot nobility, her dress career ruined, she sat around eating Ice cream with Twilight for the rest of her days. However, Spike managed to take advantage of her sadness and had Three beautiful children with her, Thus acting as a living peace treaty between Dragons and ponies.

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Lol'd

But actually the anti-bedwetting spell did work, so Twilight's friend's problem got solved ;)

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Thank you ^^
It's Stargrazer btw ;)

Lol could only happen to twilight XD good story tho :)

I enjoyed reading that Hope there's a sequel

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Or Rarity. I actually have an idea for both of them if I ever make a sequel, I just lack the time and determination to start writing.

I liked it. A different story and the ending was sweet and understanding.

Hi dear author,
I am an ABDL fan of brony in China. I would like to translate it and post the translation on Chinese MLP fan fiction websitehttps://tieba.baidu.com/f?kw=%E6%88%91%E7%9A%84%E5%B0%8F%E9%A9%AC%E9%A9%B9%E5%B0%BF%E5%B8%83%E6%98%AF%E9%AD%94%E6%B3%95&ie=utf-8. I promise I'll post the link to this page on it and declare that this is a translation work and you are the original writer. I will appreciate it if you can give me the chance!