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FIRST COMMENT I will put a comment up after i read it as well
Dethroned - Jesu
You have earned a tumbs up, a favorite, and follower.
Congratulations.
Ponyville* Dominant* Straight* Just so you know.
well I liked it and I will favorite to see where this goes, keep it coming
Who would downvote this in any way shape or form? I love it!
Well, I'm not going to give you a thumbs down, but I'm afraid this was, as you said yourself, rather clumsy and poorly written.
There were a lot of mechanical and spelling errors, for starters. There also wasn't much exposition, and all of the scenes felt a bit rushed.
Keep, writing, though, and keep improving. Get someone to look over your work before you submit it, at least to sort out any of the grammar or spelling issues.
Good luck.
-MasterCombine
So far so good have a like.
So, given by the hints, this is one of those stories where Celestia and Luna cause a genocide on humanity that makes Hitler, Stalin and Mao look like the three wise men.
I say that they should BURN!!!!!!! BURN!!!!!!!!
and, a word of advice, that thing with the colours and split personality- it's been done to death, and is more often than not... horrible.
From the menioning of Lucifer I am guessing that they are in the future. In that case go team EARTH and Demons!
703988 don't worry it's temporary
705317
Which bit?
The genocide... the KILL KILL!!!!! or the voices in my head... I meant his head.
705930 the voices except the kill kill one
So is he a demon or a human ?
And then they all died.
706538 a demon that took the form of a human
the rest of you questions will be answered (maybe) in CH.2 once i curve my drinking problem though
Pretty good WArtorn. Keep it up.
Alpha, Delta, and Omega? Delta? Why Delta? It makes no sense!