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Spike shipping for the win!

I love the sleepy time junction reference. A superb clopfic.

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Many thanks guys, glad you liked it!

And rarity comes back begging for a second chance.

You think I wouldn't notice, don't you? You honestly expect me to just let that pass? ALL ABOOOOARD CRIES THE ENGINEER, SLEEPY-TIME-JUNCTION IS SO NEAR!

ALL ABOOOOOAAAAAARD CRIES THE ENGINEER

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6705035 Later, in a different story :raritywink:

This was a good fic

Whoa.
Superb Fluttershy reading material :3
Kinda steamlolerd'd by feels train though, because my last relationship was Spike/Rarity in this fic.
One day she just told me how she is hurting me and she can't do it anymore and i should GTFO lel
*cries in a corner*

"Nodding his accent" should be "nodding his assent".

6714789 By Celestia's dongle, yeah it should :trollestia: Fixed, thank'ya.

You know, to be honest, when I saw this story, I thought, "This is another of those dreaded 'Spike gets dumped by Rarity and goes to Fluttershy for consolation and instead gets Flutterhumped' " kinda deals,:ajbemused: but upon reading it, it was one of the best constructed of those above stated stories that I've seen in a while. At the halfway point, I started enjoying reading it, and, unlike all the clichéd versions before, there wasn't unnecessary amounts of needless details to try and sound smart: it was to-the-point.:trollestia:

In short, well done!:twilightsmile:

6720926 Many thanks! I have to admit, I didn't know that this story could have been a trope or cliche. I'm glad you enjoyed it at all, but I'm very sorry that it took you half-way through to start. Was it something I can fix, or just the expectation of the cliche?

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Oh, no...don't you worry yourself! :pinkiesmile: I enjoyed the whole thing, but yes, I was expecting the clichéd content just like from the others. There aren't a lot of them, but there are a few floating around. Many of them try to have so much detail that I simply lose interest.:trixieshiftleft:

Keep doing what you're doing. I like it just the way it is.:twilightsmile:

6721009 My friend, I dunno if you know how much that phrase means to me.

I like it just the way it is.

Champagne :pinkiesmile:

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You're very welcome.:twilightsmile: I'll stick around, see what else you come up with.:raritywink:

brief, effecient use of words. I'm not sure if its the little details like his smoke singing the wall or the rooster waking fluttershy up but i really enjoyed reading this. it felt complete in a sense.

6768464 That may be the best thing anyone has ever said about one of my fics :twilightsheepish: Many thank yous :rainbowkiss:

I liked this not for the clop for but for how you handled their relationship before, going into it, and after. I can honestly believe it.

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