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Abramus5250
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Loved it, really loved it. Thanks so much for this, man! Really made me day
5614720 You are most welcome!
Should it still be called 'Grand Galloping Gala' even thought they're human. I thought the Fall Formal Dance from EG was supposed to be a humanize do term for it.
5615125 But this isn't in the Equestria Girls universe. I've never seen the movies, nor do I have the desire to, so for this, just as it was in The Pianist and the Cellist, Canterlot is Canterlot, and pretty much everything else is what it is in the show, including Ponyville.
Great story, though I notice (possibly) a run on sentence, though I can't remember where it was. There were also a few mistakes regarding tenses, so just take another look though it. Also, you use these sentences in the same scene.
Then:
Not that anything is wrong with it, but It kinda nagged at my mind when I noticed that they were so similar.
Other than that, great story! Loved how you built spike's backstory, and how you portrayed Moondancer was marvelous! Hope to see new works soon! Always nice to have a small change in scenery.
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Though he does have a point... Doesn't make much sense to keep the name if you really think about it. Though the original name helps set the scene more and gives readers an event from the actual show to relate to.
Don't normally like humanized stories, but this is, so damn good!
Loved everything about it, especially the part about, Spike's father (the knight) and Celestia (the princess), being his parents!
Great Job, as always!
Here's one for another of your wonderful stories.
http://giphy.com/gifs/applause-slow-clap-reaction-2xIOiAPXonois
Am I the only one that thinks that Blueblood isn't protrayed as a big jerk?
excellent story loved it, really wish there were more spikedancer fics.
also found this human picture of spike, but I think this is what spike's father would look like, what do you think?.
https://derpiboo.ru/527941?scope=scpe33ce73dd65b4426d41f353a6aeacb70bf8373531
5621557 I would say that is a very close representation, although think less "frilly" and more actual knight, complete with "chiseled" features and a much more masculine aura.
Going somewhat out of left field, but a petty part of me wanted to have a point where Spike could shove all that good fortune into Rarity's face. He's a noble, got the girlfriend of his dreams (and soon to be his wife), he's got money and power, and Princess Celestia is his biological mother (Obviously that is a 'I'll tell you but then have to kill you' kind of secret). And after that, especially with how it was described with his crush on Rarity years ago that never blossomed (more like crushed and pissed on the ashes in my opinion--surprised how well he took it though)
But then the understanding part of me come in and reminds me that that is childish behavior. Everyone has their right to get loved by someone else. And if anything Rarity gave Spike a huge favor: in her own way she was letting him know that there are countless women in the world that would be attracted by him and would be perfect for him, so much so that he should use his energies on that instead of trying to woo Rarity, even if he is a prince in all but official title (That's pretty much moot since Tia is his biological mother.). And I know that since he has Moondancer by his side, he probably doesn't really care what the others are doing romantically at least. The sky's the limit.
Now to the story: I enjoyed it. It's always nice to see a relationship blossom especially when the so-called class lines have been obliterated thanks to love. I have to say though, my most enjoyable part was the epilogue. Moon and Spike were together at last, she has confessed that she was a cat burglar, and Spike doesn't think any less of it. As a matter of fact, I bet that made Spike a little more attracted to Moondancer than before. Then she stated how even though she became a thief because of circumstances, she did help her family, enough so that she helped her parents put all of her older siblings through college and academies. So when Spike counters that with how he's coronated into a noble; and because of that Moondancer's set for life after her background and finding true love, I literally weeped. Weeped for joy.
Hell of a story Abrams!! Wonderful work!!
this was a very good fic.. i hope to see more like it on your stories