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I think Knightmare is pretty insane, but not as much as, say, Griffin.
What? Gunhaver doesn't end everything with violence.
Gun: yes i do. One way or another.
You're not helping.
Gun: Who said i was supposed to?
....
Gun:Exactly
Anyone here violent?
Hollow: Stupid question?
Shade: *Punches a noble, just because.* Magic pixies did it.
I think one of the requirements is to be either partially insane or completely batshit crazy!
1881239 Or super sane
Who does the cover art belong to? And story's pretty funny.
1881323 the artist requested that I not state who he was. Apparently it was 'too risque' for him.
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Dang. I wanted to see his artwork. But I respect that.
Knightmare's crazy.
Not as bat-shit as Grif, but crazy.
And not nearly as crazy as me…
Bitch be trippin balls.
Saw this and thought Code Geass, makes sense, right?
Okay, i really like this story, and I'm not trying to be rude, but I feel like you're jumping around too much in the timeline of the story. Last chapter he was training to get his memories back, and now he's getting knighted? I feel like there's some information missing there. If this is in terms of Knightmare's mental stability, he might just be a little flighty and foggy with his recollections. I like how you've made him a more mature character for the most part, but at the same time there's information we're missing that is needed in terms of the overarching story. Again, not trying to be rude, just offering my opinion. Hope all goes well with your story good sir.
1881644 Basically I spoke with a few fellow authors and we decided to just edit the existing chapters rather than write whole new ones. As such the existing chapters for the GGG are still canon, but will be edited to fit the new alterations soon. I dind't fee like fighting through writer's block considering how behind I am. And the original version left off shortly before the Knighting ceremony that Aoi and griffin ditched out on.
Okay, the existing chapters staying canon was what I thought was going on, but still the jump from training to being knighted was a little confusing
1881723 that's to be expected.
Well, quite obviously, Knightmare is, and I quote right back at him; "Nucking Futs."
Honestly, most the Chess Pieces are crazy, or insane in some cases, in someway. Ember's got this sorta 'you mess with me I'll fuck you up twice as hard' deal and crazy dead twin and or ancient evil thing going on, Griffin has the dark, edgies and crazies, Ivan is bat-shit insane à la crazy spider-god... thing. Mango will probably have something crazy going on with him eventually (be it mind or body), Ace, Jazz and Zeta do whatever the fuck they want, Fudge has some sorta obsessed vengeance deal going on with D-Dogs and Zeta, Lycan simply does whatever he thinks will power him up the most, and Hollow's soul shattered and formed evil alter-egos of most or close to all of the Chess Pieces. Oh, and he sees "on-screen" chat boxes. And Rook has mild PTSD.
Frankly, the only relatively 'sane' Pieces, in my opinion, are the non-combatants. Missy, Echo, and, uh, that one piece going around with a reporter (Or is s/he the reporter?), for example.
1881839 Puppy Love isn't a chess piece.
1881877 Eh, well, I thought... she?.. was. Or was going around with a chess piece. Oh well, nobody can get everything right all the time.
Hm... He appears to be one of the more "Stable" combatant Chess Pieces...He's still a little crazy, but not on the level of Marty Sue or Griffin. Sure, he has some...issues, but those he appears to be dealing with better than some.
1881890 She goes around interviewing the Chess Pieces.
1881922 Technically hes a support changeling. Not a non-combattant like Missy , but he doesn't dive into fights like Griffin. And yeah, he's got issues...all of 'em do.
you know this story has a lot of perspective problems.
1883112 yes, that it does. it's what happens when you go through five different ideas at once on how to write the damn thing. I'm tempted to call it quits, make the plotline I mapped out for it public, and just stick to doing crossovers.
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I have a question is this story anthro or is it just the cover art?
Violent? Nooo...
Jazz: "Should I hide this cannon then?"
Probably.
-Glassed
1883163 just the cover art...and Knightmare.
Excellent, glad to see you back, again.
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*Sigh.* Mr. Felix, I'm going to need that hammer of yours again...
Violent ha let me tell you how that is ridiculous after I put away my brass knuckles
1883127 so what scps did knightmare watch over?
1890973 you know the onw holding 682? The unkillable lizard? That's the one Knightmare was stationed at....
1891347 i am surprised he was not fed to it.
1891892 They tried....it spat him out just before the door could close.
Luck favors the bold, and Knightmare can be VERY bold.
1893987 it should have adapted /throws hissy fit!
As several people have already said, I'm confused. The first couple chapters made sense, but as of recently I have absolutely no idea what's going on. Can you try and sort out all of the issues?
1883127
If you have 5 different ideas on how to write it, it might have been a better idea to pick one of the ideas instead of posting all of them randomly mish-mashed together in an extremely confusing fashion.
1911795 I agree. Plus, I'm confused with the storyline as a whole because I haven't read the other 'Chesspiece's' stories besides Griffin's and Aoi's.
Did I miss something? Is this like a sequel or something?