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Violet CLM


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A plan has been made to tell the CMC traditional fairytales as bedtime stories, in order to improve their cultural sophistication. However, the tellers have been embellishing said fairytales to star themselves in central roles: Rarity as Cinderella, and so on. Now it is Fluttershy's turn... and she doesn't think she's up to the task.

The CMC agree with her there, but they have a plan to help her out, no matter how much unavoidable property damage occurs along the way.

Rated T for minor sexual humor.

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Comments ( 11 )

That was thoroughly enjoyable. It made me laugh several times. Well done! :raritywink:

This was pretty wild.

This was certainly a story.

You broke my brain. I'm going to be randomly laughing all day at work now. This is a pure work of genius. Or madness. Or both.

Oh, dear. Poor Fluttershy... I hope they never find the magazines.

I reviewed this story as part of Read It Later Reviews #69.

My review can be found here.

Ridiculous, but pretty darn amusing with it. The ending line was entirely worth the read, as was the continued references to Rarity selling her sister for a barrel of antique hatpins - a perfectly logical and morally correct thing to do if one is blessed with a Crusader for a sibling.

Poor Scootaloo though.

This is some high-quality old-school Crusader shenanigans. Hilarious stuff from start to finish. Thank you for it.

Scootaloo shook her head. “Nah. I mean, all the other girls have been doing it just fine! We even ran into Trixie yesterday and she told us all about how all her friends had their cutie marks swapped but she saved the day and then Princess Celestia turned her into an alicorn.”

Hmmm...I realize this is probably a blatant parody of Magical Mystery Cure, but it does remind me of another certain webseries in which ponies swap their bodies, their livelihoods, their true purpose and Trixie does have to intervene....

Sweetie Belle nodded happily. “Right! And the husband can’t be evil either, because when Rarity sold me for a barrel of hatpins, she never got in any trouble for that!”

Tsssh, stop doing these things to a tired pegasister who's at least a season behind, I had to Google that to ensure it never actually happened at any point in the series. (I mean, Fluttershy herself was nearly traded into slavery for a book, once, so....it's not entirely out of odds.)

Cute story! It was a lot of fun to read!

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