The original story of Pen Mark. He is a transcolt who goes through his adventure in Ponyville beside the Mane 6. A writer who has a desire to live by his own rules and happiness, he searches to see if he has what it takes to take charge of his own life.
Two things.
One, your grammar needs work. For instance, your narration is a mix of both present and past tenses, and your protagonist states at one point that he has "one questions".
Two, self-insert OCs generally don't go over well around here.
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Thank you for pointing those out. I'll work on those! Also, nothing is wrong with trying right? :)
I love how you accuratly captured Twilight as an angel