• Member Since 11th Jun, 2015
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Seanofthesky


Transgender Brony who lives to tell his stories.

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The original story of Pen Mark. He is a transcolt who goes through his adventure in Ponyville beside the Mane 6. A writer who has a desire to live by his own rules and happiness, he searches to see if he has what it takes to take charge of his own life.

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Two things.

One, your grammar needs work. For instance, your narration is a mix of both present and past tenses, and your protagonist states at one point that he has "one questions".

Two, self-insert OCs generally don't go over well around here.

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Thank you for pointing those out. I'll work on those! Also, nothing is wrong with trying right? :)

I love how you accuratly captured Twilight as an angel :twilightsmile:

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