But yeah, a school would have to be incredibly irresponsible to not teach safe sex on the assumption that fillies and colts would abstain from an activity that costs nothing to do, and feels fantastic.
But yeah, a school would have to be incredibly irresponsible to not teach safe sex on the assumption that fillies and colts would abstain from an activity that costs nothing to do, and feels fantastic."
Previous chapter, I thought "PREGNANT TWILIGHT", which was quickly disproven in the beginning of this chapter. Oh wait, what's that sound? Out in the distance? Listens closely...
*more more more more! more! more! MORE! MOOORRREEE!*
Ah, that's exactly what I was thinking! Thanks background voices!
6829586 Thank you very much for your thorough feedback! I am always striving to improve myself and my writing. I do have proofreaders and editors who catch the majority of typing errors, but alas a few do slip through. If you can remember specific examples, by all means, message me so that I can correct them.
Shining and Twilight constantly playing the 'lol pls gimme de pussy b0ss' while Shining is like, 'no u durty weeb fuk', but just one ask later, the character is all for it, no holding back.
This is actually building up to the ending of Sunday Bunch. Where Shining completes his character arc. (I won't spoil it here though.)
And as for the stomach bulge... without going into too much personal detail, I can tell you that it is actually possible without injury or fatality. It just depends on your size and angle of entry into her.
Thanks for not being one of 'those authors' that immediately gets pissed when criticism is put forth. Most of the time I don't write comments because I myself don't have a story written/to share with the site, and it makes me feel hypocritical. I just figured that since I really do like most of the stuff you write, I'd toss in my two cents and see where it went from there.
6833488 Certainly. I can appreciate criticism when it is presented in a reasonable, constructive way. I'll sometimes get comments or messages pointing out typos. And I love it! It shows me that my readers really love and care about my stories, and they want them to be the very best they can be. Unfortunately, a lot of clop authors, particularly fetish clop authors get a lot of inflammatory comments or messages. I've certainly gotten my share.
u an ur writing r fukking cancer! dis iz y peple hate broniez! ur writing is shit and i hope u die in a fire!!!
I immediately ignore/block/report that kind of garbage. More often though, someone will comment simply saying that they didn't like the content of a story with no particular specific gripe. And that's fine. I understand that not everyone is going to like everything that I write. But when I see the Likes bar having a 14:1 ratio of likes to dislikes, I call it a win.
Magic trick shenanigans? Oh man is that ever my fetish. And the way you handled the reactions of Twilight and Shining were very perceptive. I hope to see more very soon!
6838852 don't you dare!!! How can you make twixie end so sadly!?! They both deserve better!!
Well, gotta say I love this. Fave, and like. Please give us more soon!
And if I'm certain... You did some foreshadowing here. Shiny said she'd meet someone, someone better. This could mean a lot of ponies... But there are only two others in the tags, and one of them got her brother. Do you want to know what I think? She WILL get someone better... A pony more mature, that traveled long and far, that saw new lands, made mistakes and learned from them, that discovered humility and forgiveness...
A pony that only needs now to be shown love. I'm looking at you, post rock farm Trixie! Make it happen, ShippingShy demands it!!!
(It would be shipping'dance, but there are no emoticons from heart but here =p)
7078195 Well, remember when I commented on it, about how I was going to write my own version?
AGH! I was going to write this! But I've been so busy! Now I have to read it! [edit] I read this and I loved it. I would have done it a little differently. Perhaps I will still write my own version. Anyway, have a Like/Fav/Follow!
Says YOU Shining. We all vote for Twilight's idea.
6820701 Hark! Is that an Incomplete story status I see?
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Shining/Twilight/Cadence threesome, anyone?
Dirty talking Twilight....
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Meanwhile in the American deep south...
6822074 Shhh...
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Previous chapter, I thought "PREGNANT TWILIGHT", which was quickly disproven in the beginning of this chapter.
Oh wait, what's that sound? Out in the distance? Listens closely...
*more more more more! more! more! MORE! MOOORRREEE!*
Ah, that's exactly what I was thinking! Thanks background voices!
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Awwww yeeaaahh!
6826672 Thank you.
This a masterpiece!
6829586 Thank you very much for your thorough feedback!
I am always striving to improve myself and my writing. I do have proofreaders and editors who catch the majority of typing errors, but alas a few do slip through. If you can remember specific examples, by all means, message me so that I can correct them.
This is actually building up to the ending of Sunday Bunch. Where Shining completes his character arc. (I won't spoil it here though.)
And as for the stomach bulge... without going into too much personal detail, I can tell you that it is actually possible without injury or fatality. It just depends on your size and angle of entry into her.
Man, when someone told Trixie to go fuck herself...
Would've been great if Trixie forgot to use the contraception spell when going at Twi with Shining's parts
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Thanks for not being one of 'those authors' that immediately gets pissed when criticism is put forth. Most of the time I don't write comments because I myself don't have a story written/to share with the site, and it makes me feel hypocritical. I just figured that since I really do like most of the stuff you write, I'd toss in my two cents and see where it went from there.
6833488 Certainly. I can appreciate criticism when it is presented in a reasonable, constructive way. I'll sometimes get comments or messages pointing out typos. And I love it! It shows me that my readers really love and care about my stories, and they want them to be the very best they can be. Unfortunately, a lot of clop authors, particularly fetish clop authors get a lot of inflammatory comments or messages. I've certainly gotten my share.
I immediately ignore/block/report that kind of garbage. More often though, someone will comment simply saying that they didn't like the content of a story with no particular specific gripe. And that's fine. I understand that not everyone is going to like everything that I write. But when I see the Likes bar having a 14:1 ratio of likes to dislikes, I call it a win.
That part with Trixie made me so sad
Magic trick shenanigans? Oh man is that ever my fetish. And the way you handled the reactions of Twilight and Shining were very perceptive. I hope to see more very soon!
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6838852 btw when I noticed it was you who wrote this I freaked out cause I loved your story with shining armor and his mother
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6838852 don't you dare!!! How can you make twixie end so sadly!?! They both deserve better!!
Well, gotta say I love this. Fave, and like. Please give us more soon!
And if I'm certain... You did some foreshadowing here. Shiny said she'd meet someone, someone better. This could mean a lot of ponies... But there are only two others in the tags, and one of them got her brother. Do you want to know what I think? She WILL get someone better... A pony more mature, that traveled long and far, that saw new lands, made mistakes and learned from them, that discovered humility and forgiveness...
A pony that only needs now to be shown love. I'm looking at you, post rock farm Trixie! Make it happen, ShippingShy demands it!!!
(It would be shipping'dance, but there are no emoticons from heart but here =p)
Sounds familiar...
7078195 Well, remember when I commented on it, about how I was going to write my own version?
Well, I did.
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Still love your version though. You should definitely add to it.
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Ha! Well that would explain it.
Now I just have to get around to reading this one.
Mmm! I definitely love the sound of that!
I certainly would!
I love the thought of Trixie having a big, fat ass, and I think Twilight does too!