• Published 29th Nov 2015
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General Derpy Vs. The Doctor - Actor The Unicorn



Derpy is now a General for the Lunar Replica after the Doctor droped her off 12 years ago.

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War

It's been a few days since the Doctor came. He spend his time in his room. Well it's more off a cell. Big Mac walked into the room.

"The Princess and General want to speak with you" Big Mac pointed.

The Doctor nodded and walked out with his head down to the main hall. Trixie was at the door. When the Doctor was at the door she opened the huge towering door. The two mares were sitting at the table.

"You may go inside now" Trixie said to the brown stallion

The Doctor walked in with General Derpy having her head down.

"Hello Princess and General" the Doctor bowed his head and lifting his leg

"Hello. I heard your name was Doctor and you traveled with my General before all this" Luna walked up offering a hoof shake.

The Doctor took the offer, but Derpy huffed and puffed out her chest an looked the other way.

"You have to excess her. She's been having a ruff few day" Luna whispered to the Doctor.

"Oh I underst..." the Doctor got intruded by some soldier.

"Princess, General the Solar Empire is on there way here as we speak!!" the soldier said.

"I'm on it" General Derpy flew out with the soldier right behind her behind.

"DERPY WAIT!!!!!!!" he stared to run after her. However Trixie grabbed him with her magic

"Were do you think your going" she said turning him upside down.

"Please. You have to let me go after her" the Doctor plead.

"The Princess gets to say what happens with you" Trixie looked at Luna

"Take him back to his room. I have to help General Derpy on the battle field" Luna said puffing her chest out

"WAIT WHAT" the Doctor screamed while getting take away.


On the battle field with Luna and Derpy

General Derpy was fighting the other team when Luna came flying in landing right next to Derpy.

"You took long enough" Derpy smirking.

"Well you know how it is" Luna smirked as well "Derpy I got it down her. Find Twilight and capture her" she said to General Derpy.

General Derpy agreed and flew off to find Twilight Sparkle. On the way she had to kill 5 more ponies before she found Twilight. 15 thousand, 8 hundred and 81 ponies now Derpy thought to her self while landing in front of Twilight.

"We meet again General" Twilight said with a small bow.

"Same to you" Derpy bowed as well.

"It's so terrible that you chose Night Mare Moon for a leader" Twilight said while circling General Derpy

"She's the same Princess Luna you helped that one Night mare night. You remember!" she went into a battle stance "however you picked the ruler who banished her own sister to the moon even though she could have help her by being there for her." she smirked while holding her sword

Twilight had enough and lunched forward foolishly not knowing she would get got.

"Ahhhh" she was put under a sleeping spell by a potion.

"You know. Being a pony that's super smart. You sure are bad at knowing what's a trap and what's not" she was taking to the sleeping Twilight. She flew above Princess Luna giving her the signal.

"DON'T STOP FIGHTING" Luna yelled to everypony while General Derpy was flying away to the head quarters

While General Derpy was flying her way off the battle field she had to fight some ponies (luckily she didn't have to kill anypony) however her wig was cut, so she had to run the rest of the way. When she finally got inside she yelled in pain.

"Help. Somepony help" she screamed while she clasped to the floor.

Big Mac and Trixie came running in.

"General are you aright" Trixie said helping her back up. They also say a big bag on her back. "Did you capture her?"

"Yes I did. and I need a doctor right now my wig is damage" she said showing them there wig. "Big Mac get Twilight a cell and make sure she can't use any magic. You understand"

"Sir yes sir" Big Mac and Trixie said together.

"Come with me General" Trixie said helping Derpy up

"Thank you Trixie. and get me The Doctor you understand" General Derpy said into Trixie's ear. Trixie nodded.


With the Doctor and Derpy

"DERPY WHAT WERE YOU THINKING GOING OUT INTO BATTLE!!!!!!" The Doctor yelled at Derpy

"WILL YOU STOP TREATING ME LIKE I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT I'M DOING. I'VE BEEN DOING THIS FOR 4 YEARS NOW." She yelled back about to hit him, but didn't cause she didn't want to look bad in front of everypony. "SO SHUT UP AND LISTEN TO ME DOCTOR. YOU LEFT ME AND THIS WAS THE ONLY WAY TO GET BACK TO MY OLD LIFE BACK. AND YOU KEEP SAYING IT'S MY FALT WHEN IT'S ACTLULY YOUR FALT FOR NOT COMING FOR ME AGAIN, SO GET OFF MY CHEST!!!! I HATE YOU!!!!" Derpy stormed out of the room.

The Doctor was taken back from the words she said. He just sat down and began to cry because he didn't know what else to do.

"What have I done"

Author's Note:

Hope you enjoy.

Comments ( 2 )

I liked it but it has many spelling and grammar errors. Keep going though.

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