General Derpy Vs. The Doctor

by Actor The Unicorn

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Derpy is now a General for the Lunar Replica after the Doctor droped her off 12 years ago.

After the Doctor drops off Derpy from there last adventure to see her kids again. The Doctor comes back 12 Years later to see a war broke out and sees that is sweet used to be innocent company is now a highly trained General for the Lunar Republic. How is the Doctor going to explain to Derpy why he was gone. If he can????

The Luner Republic

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12 year ago

"Bye Doctor. See you in a few days" Derpy said to the Doctor while leaving the T.A.R.D.I.S.

The Doctor just waved his hoof in the air smiling from there last adventure. However the Doctor just did something that he will regret for the rest of his life.


Now

"When I say fire you fire you got that soldier" A mare with golden amour said.

"Yes General" the soldier said holding the gun.

"And....FIRE!!!!!!!!"

All you can hear are gun shots and magic beams every where. The Lunar Republic was slowly wining ground from the Solar Empire.

The two sisters went to war because the oldest sister was being a cruel and unfair ruler, and the youngest had enough of it. A civil war broke out.

A few hours later the war stopped for a bit, so Princess Luna, General Derpy, Specialist Trixie and Big Mac can talk about a plan to win this civil war. There was non stop arguing about the plan until General Derpy had enough.

"ENOUGH" she said smashing her hoof on the table "Instead of making a plan were fighting like a bunch of school fillies. And it's bad enough I have to teach my kids to walk across dead bodies and to kill. And the faster this is over they can put the killing thing to rest. Every one understand" She said eyeing every pony at the table.

They all agreed. Slowly but surly they had a plan. However when they were still talking out the rest of the plan they hear a sound coming from behind them. A blue box comes out of no where and General Derpy's ears go down.

"Derpy you ready fo..." The Doctor froze to see four ponies there in military uniforms and happens to see a grey Pegasus with a blonde mane in the mix to.

General Derpy walked up to the Doctor in shocked.

"Doctor?" she barley could say the word.

"Oh...Derpy what have you done" He said about to give her a hug until boom. Punched by General Derpy.

"I'VE WAITED 12 YEARS FOR YOU DOCTOR AND YOUR SAYING THIS IS MY FALT. AND ITS GENERAL DERPY NOW THANK YOU VERY MUCH" she said stomping her hoof on the ground with one single tear running down her face.

"General is every thing alright" Luna said touching the Pegasus's shoulder.

However she didn't answer her question.

"Derpy I'm sorry I'm so so sorry. And what do you mean its been 12 years" he said knowing me messed up.

However she didn't reply to his question either.

"Take him to a room. I'll ask him questions later and put that blue box somewhere were I can only find it" General Derpy said puffing her chest out. "Princess my I have a word with you in my sleep chambers" she walked off.

"WHAT!!!??? DERPY YOU CAN'T DO THIS" he was trying to shove off Big Mac and Trixi.

"Night night brown." Trixi said putting him to sleep with a sleeping spell.

"WAIT WHA..." before he can finished his sentence he was off to sleep on Big Mac's back


With General Derpy and Princess Luna

"General are you ok? Who was the stallion" Luna said putting a hoof on the grey pony.

"An old friend...I used to travel with him before... This" she said facing the window seeing all the dead ponies out her window "He promise to come back in a few days. However days turned to weeks, weeks turned into months and months turned into years. That when I gave up I thought he was never coming for me again." she said putting her head down about to cry.

Luna just raped her around with her for a hug, because she didn't know what to do for her poor friend.

"I'm sorry Derpy" is all the princess could say to her while petting her mane.


With the Doctor

"Derpy!!!!!" He woke up. He ran to the door however it was locked. He pulled out his sonic, but it wasn't there.

"No...No what have I done. Poor Derpy" he whispered to him self and was crying. He made a huge mistake. He shouldn't have let her off the T.A.R.D.I.S that day. He got up and walked to the window to see what was out there. He covered his mouth with his hoof.

"How many? How many did Derpy kill? HOW MANY!!!" he screamed to himself banging his hoof on the window.

"15 thousand, 8 hundred and 76 ponies" a voice said behind him.

The Doctor turned around in shocked to see Derpy.

"I can still here there screams in my head and there blood on my hoof's; I cry with the Princess sometimes cause I can't help myself, but now I know how you feel to smile to hide my rage and sadness" General Derpy said walking over to the window with the Doctor.

"Derpy I..." he didn't finished

"It's General...Derpy now" she smirked. "I couldn't even get to head mail mare, but somehow I got to General. crazy" she laughed a bit

"Oh...I'm so sorry for leaving you. I didn't mean to" he said with tears coming down his muzzle. Derpy turned his head to look at hers.

"Come with me" she said while standing back up. The Doctor fallowed the grey Pegasus to seemed to be room. The doctor looked up at the label and it said :General's Derpy's room:.

As the walked inside he saw all only weapons and pictures off old times.

"What happened to MY Derpy?" he said looking at one off the pictures with him Derpy and her two daughter's.

"I grew up" she said looking at the key the Doctor gave her when she first started to go on the adventures.

Trixie was in the door way of General Derpy's room. She knocked on the door. Derpy's eared perked up although the Doctor didn't seemed to mind. She walked over to the door way looking at the Doctor, who just seemed to not have a care in the world for what was happing just fixed on that picture

"Hello Trixie. What at honor to see you" she put on a fake smile.

"The Princess wants to see you" Trixie said bowing.

"Take him back to his room. I'm done with him for now" Derpy said on the way out. "I'm sorry Doctor" she said under her breath as she flew off in the sky.

War

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It's been a few days since the Doctor came. He spend his time in his room. Well it's more off a cell. Big Mac walked into the room.

"The Princess and General want to speak with you" Big Mac pointed.

The Doctor nodded and walked out with his head down to the main hall. Trixie was at the door. When the Doctor was at the door she opened the huge towering door. The two mares were sitting at the table.

"You may go inside now" Trixie said to the brown stallion

The Doctor walked in with General Derpy having her head down.

"Hello Princess and General" the Doctor bowed his head and lifting his leg

"Hello. I heard your name was Doctor and you traveled with my General before all this" Luna walked up offering a hoof shake.

The Doctor took the offer, but Derpy huffed and puffed out her chest an looked the other way.

"You have to excess her. She's been having a ruff few day" Luna whispered to the Doctor.

"Oh I underst..." the Doctor got intruded by some soldier.

"Princess, General the Solar Empire is on there way here as we speak!!" the soldier said.

"I'm on it" General Derpy flew out with the soldier right behind her behind.

"DERPY WAIT!!!!!!!" he stared to run after her. However Trixie grabbed him with her magic

"Were do you think your going" she said turning him upside down.

"Please. You have to let me go after her" the Doctor plead.

"The Princess gets to say what happens with you" Trixie looked at Luna

"Take him back to his room. I have to help General Derpy on the battle field" Luna said puffing her chest out

"WAIT WHAT" the Doctor screamed while getting take away.


On the battle field with Luna and Derpy

General Derpy was fighting the other team when Luna came flying in landing right next to Derpy.

"You took long enough" Derpy smirking.

"Well you know how it is" Luna smirked as well "Derpy I got it down her. Find Twilight and capture her" she said to General Derpy.

General Derpy agreed and flew off to find Twilight Sparkle. On the way she had to kill 5 more ponies before she found Twilight. 15 thousand, 8 hundred and 81 ponies now Derpy thought to her self while landing in front of Twilight.

"We meet again General" Twilight said with a small bow.

"Same to you" Derpy bowed as well.

"It's so terrible that you chose Night Mare Moon for a leader" Twilight said while circling General Derpy

"She's the same Princess Luna you helped that one Night mare night. You remember!" she went into a battle stance "however you picked the ruler who banished her own sister to the moon even though she could have help her by being there for her." she smirked while holding her sword

Twilight had enough and lunched forward foolishly not knowing she would get got.

"Ahhhh" she was put under a sleeping spell by a potion.

"You know. Being a pony that's super smart. You sure are bad at knowing what's a trap and what's not" she was taking to the sleeping Twilight. She flew above Princess Luna giving her the signal.

"DON'T STOP FIGHTING" Luna yelled to everypony while General Derpy was flying away to the head quarters

While General Derpy was flying her way off the battle field she had to fight some ponies (luckily she didn't have to kill anypony) however her wig was cut, so she had to run the rest of the way. When she finally got inside she yelled in pain.

"Help. Somepony help" she screamed while she clasped to the floor.

Big Mac and Trixie came running in.

"General are you aright" Trixie said helping her back up. They also say a big bag on her back. "Did you capture her?"

"Yes I did. and I need a doctor right now my wig is damage" she said showing them there wig. "Big Mac get Twilight a cell and make sure she can't use any magic. You understand"

"Sir yes sir" Big Mac and Trixie said together.

"Come with me General" Trixie said helping Derpy up

"Thank you Trixie. and get me The Doctor you understand" General Derpy said into Trixie's ear. Trixie nodded.


With the Doctor and Derpy

"DERPY WHAT WERE YOU THINKING GOING OUT INTO BATTLE!!!!!!" The Doctor yelled at Derpy

"WILL YOU STOP TREATING ME LIKE I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT I'M DOING. I'VE BEEN DOING THIS FOR 4 YEARS NOW." She yelled back about to hit him, but didn't cause she didn't want to look bad in front of everypony. "SO SHUT UP AND LISTEN TO ME DOCTOR. YOU LEFT ME AND THIS WAS THE ONLY WAY TO GET BACK TO MY OLD LIFE BACK. AND YOU KEEP SAYING IT'S MY FALT WHEN IT'S ACTLULY YOUR FALT FOR NOT COMING FOR ME AGAIN, SO GET OFF MY CHEST!!!! I HATE YOU!!!!" Derpy stormed out of the room.

The Doctor was taken back from the words she said. He just sat down and began to cry because he didn't know what else to do.

"What have I done"