Family? Friends? Country? Updraft, an Enclave officer undercover in the Wasteland, is forced to rethink his relationships with his old life and his new. And what will he do if the fates of ponies rest on his decision? Will he choose wisely?
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Friendly word of advice, link to the stories that aren't rated m. Please respond to this comment.
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Per your recommendation, I updated the description to link to the non-mature fics:
They are:
No One (Heroes)
Mimezinga (Pink Eyes)
Fallingsnow (Guise of Chaos)
Thanks for the advice!
One
New Perks:
Blind Rage: "You won't like him when he's angry" - +3 STR, -3 CHA
The Incredible Friend: "He may not turn big and green put he still hits hard!" - When a friend is in danger, gain +25 Magic Prowess, -10% Magical Burnout effects
Flower & Brownie
New Perk:
Dirty Jokes: "Honey this isn't the time or the place." - Near-death experiences aren't as bad when you're with the one you love +1 LCK, +5 Health
Silver
New Perk:
A Mare's fury: "I'd suggest begging for forgiveness and giving her chocolate." +1 PER, +1 STR when angry at your special somepony
7498283
ROFL so hard right now
I also thought One's could be "And there can be only One!"
Another great chapter, and yep, Silver's mad. For a minute there I thought there was gonna be some big revelation of Dust having wings or something. There were some intense parts to this chapter though, what with rockslides and hostage situations. I'm not liking this mercenary guy, though it sounds like he might not make it back to town alive. I'm hoping he at least lives long enough for the group to ask him some questions about Muddy. Anyways, nice chapter, but when will Dust learn to stop upsetting Silver?
7498283 Also, your perk ideas are great.
7498296 Didn't think of that one, maybe another event later will be worth it
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Thanks for the comments! I'm glad you liked the chapter. It was a little challenging to pace properly.... but I think it came out at least OK.
Regarding Dust's big secret: the reveal will be worth the wait
Thanks again for being such a loyal fan!