Family? Friends? Country? Updraft, an Enclave officer undercover in the Wasteland, is forced to rethink his relationships with his old life and his new. And what will he do if the fates of ponies rest on his decision? Will he choose wisely?
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Glad you liked it!
Can't wait to see what you think about Chapter 9 (assuming you haven't read it already)
FP
Huzzah! I finished chapter nine! Dust is continuing to spin his whole Web of lies, it's gonna be bad if/when Silver finds out the truth. Also slavers, this is going to end great, seeing as how they're outnumbered two to one. Anyways, fun chapter, I look forward to the next one!
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Glad you liked chapter 9 too....
Yes, Dust's web of lies will be an interesting reveal when it happens, and it will happen, I promise you that.
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I'm glad you like Allegiances so far!
Dust's stupidity... if it's his general cluelessness about the Wasteland, then I am basing that off of the fact that he's only been in the Wasteland for a year and had largely relied on Muddy during that time. Now that Muddy has left and he is on his own (from an Enclave viewpoint) that stupidity should slowly be waning. If it is his stupidity regarding Silver, I was hoping for it to come across as more of an awkwardness with mares and not general stupidity.
Either way, I can definitely see your point.
Hopefully you like the story going forward.
Thanks again!