This story is a sequel to Grand Heist vs The Mysterious Mare Do Well
Dodge Junction. It is called by many as the 'source of all of Equestria's trains'; all trains either originate from there or go through it, and it is also where trains and railtracks are built.
However, various shipments of matierals, products and prototypes belonging to Iron Will Industries, Equestria's biggest developer of magic technology, have mysteriously vanished, and two of the company's employees have hired the Royal Guard to investigate
....and Rainbow Dash, Twilight Sparkle and Applejack are going to help.
Chapters (6)
I'll admit I can be rather biased in my preferences, so I didn't like this version of Trixie too much. However, I hope you can build on it and make her more than just one trait. Conversely, I did find Lt. Sapphire Shores hilarious, and I could easily envision the trio in that last scene and found it really cool. Keep it up.
6694058 thanks! also if you haven't checked out the other stories in this verse, go to the Rainbow is Magic group, they should all be there
Hey there. Thanks greatly for doing this story. The exchanges, emotional content and future chapter set-up are all well done in all the right places. I have to admit, I am kind of surprised to see Trixie behaving a lot like canon Fluttershy. I wonder though, is that genuine or just an act to keep others from getting suspicious of her for some reason? At any rate, I'll definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
Once again, thanks greatly for getting the next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. Once again, excellent job on the exchanges, emotional content, action and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I have my suspicions about The Phantom's identity, but I'll keep quiet about them in order to minimize spoilers for other readers AND in case I'm wrong about said suspicions. At any rate, I'll definitely look forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
6955628 no go ahead tell me your thories : 3
Hey there. Thanks again for getting this chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. Once again, very good job on the exchanges, emotional content, action and wrap-up in all the right places. Not much more I can say here except keep up the good work. :-D
Not much I can say other than VERY good job on the exchanges, emotional content and future story set-up in all the right places in this epilogue. I particularly liked Trixie and Rainbow's talk and the (former) Mayor's reality check. I'll definitely be looking forward to more of your work as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
This was an interesting story, but I don't see myself rereading it much, so I can't really favorite it.
7204148 XD that's fine