• Member Since 29th Jan, 2015
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Deidara21


Hello everybody err...pony! Um...well I love both Naruto and My little pony and um...um...that's it...

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Twilight sparkle is thrown into the world of Undertale, meeting many friends, enemies, and certain evil flowers along her journey back to the surface.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 24 )

It's great writing so far, and you chose a great character to be featured.

Also you forgot a tag to the story.

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Wait, how do you add a tag??

6746018 click edit on the story, and scroll down to the other tag

6746182 Do you need a proff-reader.

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Thnx, and a proof reader would be helpful

Let's see here... love, friendship, HONESTY! KINDNESS! LAUGHTER! GENEROSITY! LOYALTY! lastly -- DETERMINATION!

One of these things is not like the other. :D

Make, up, your, mind, what, pro, nouns, re, fer, to, her.

How long will this story be? Will you be exploring all of the endings?

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It'll be quite long, but I'll probably only be exploring the pacifist, unless otherwise

out of times... why meow?

"Naruto heard a familiar voice echoing through his ears, another couple of steps and the echoing turned into understandable words."
what?

Ninja? Jutsu? Really with the Naruto stuff? Three chapters in a row? Also, it's seven, not eight. Just saying.

Im Curious.....Twilight is a Cinnamon or a butterscotch pony? :twilightsmile:

"What do you think about my offer...still...want to be friends?"

Toriel turned and flashed a sincere smile. "Of course."

"and i come back to you now...at the turn of the tide" - Gandalf Toriel

This time, Twiloght went east of the ice lake, dhe found himself

Twilight, and , herself o-o

"Um ok? At least the horse has crawled back."

"Oh wow he has!

pony/mare, she
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In the end Sans just almost called Twilight a filly? How old is she is this story? i know is Pre-princess status...

Twilight walked to the other side of the pink tiled layout. On her way out, she gave Sans a side smile. "You know...your brother's pretty nice!"

"I guess you would say...it's fun tibia around him."

"..."

Ho my god....It is really Sans ><"

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