During their hunt for the monster Discord, Princess Celestia and Princess Luna are forced to take shelter from an unnatural storm. A kindly old unicorn takes them into his home. But who is this wise stranger that seems to know more about the immortal alicorns and their origins than they themselves know? One-shot story set in my War of the Fallen Race universe.
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Well done
Saul kind of sounds like the spirit of the sun based on some details.
1078106 'Kind of' you say?
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Alright I'm fully aware that Saul is the Sun's Spirit.I don't know why I put that understatement.
Holy crap. There is NO WAY you are allowed to say my stuff rivals yours. I'm just... astounded. I love this story... I can't really come up with more to say, I loved the mysterious aspect, the slow reveal, the hints at a greater order to things... a great blend of said and unsaid that made it seem like a much longer story.
How can this not have more views and upvotes?? Your prose ranks up there with the best, and I envy how easy you make it seem to whip up a complex character.
I think I see perhaps one missing comma, maybe one place where I'd choose a different tense, and one or two places where punctuation might benefit from a change, but that's IT. Tight writing- you are much more concise than I am, but you do an excellent job of painting a scene with carefully chosen words.
Liked, favved, WATCHED!
1498629 Artist's Syndrome. From my point of view all of my stuff is utter crap and everyone else is making Franz Kafka weep.
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Well... that's better than being convinced you're a gift to the language. Still, I enjoy your style greatly, and I'm grateful you've taken the time to offer your expertise on my own efforts!
Also, Kafka did some really messed up stuff. Would he weep, or perhaps eat a bug?
Greetings, I would like to post one of my fanfiction on folder for people who are new to making fanfiction and i don't know how. Please tell me how. For now
FARE WELL!!! :3