The wyvern, one of the few creatures in Equestria known for having such ferocity and enough primal rage to strike fear into the heart of the dragons. To those few that know of their existence, they are but a horrid plague that is trapped in their own icy hell of the northern tundras. Until the one breaks free of her prison, descending down to wreak havoc upon the mining towns of the Frozen North. In order to stop this creature from consuming everything he knows, one stallion must recruit some unsavory allies, including a taxing dragon, a drunken tracker, and a questionable knight and his squire.
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You have a good start here. I'm looking forward to how this story progresses.
Any relation to the War of the Fallen Race universe?
440151 It could be, but it is so far removed from the areas concerned with WotFR that any influence by the humans would be minimal. Can't decide whether to drop some hints about our existence or not.
Ah, the reason I ask is that I am a major HiE buff.
441262 I guess I could drop a few subliminal hints or something.
Hmmm, sounds like an awesome story Klondike. Now we get into the prospectors and miners eh? They could be in Alaska but if your discription of Equestria's land holdings is still in effect then they would be a long ways off. I suppose they could be in northern Canada, that would be a hell of allot closer.
I look forward to reading this story, TRACKED!
Good chapter, keep it up!
@PegasusKlondike There is no need for you to change your story in anyway just to appease me! Just because I am a HiE buff doesn't mean I won't read your story =P
Is obsidian/Venerax going to show up and kick the shit outta that HUGE Wyvern?
453106 Maaaaayyybe.
I think venerax is gonna get pissed...
Hmmm... I seen what you did there with the demons. I suppose this is the point were Richard takes the whole driving towards minnesota to a new lever and is contracted by the mining company to... built faster travel? I think way to much of this stuff...
A great chapter, as was the last! As always I look forward to the next chapter.
Hahaha. I like this chapter.
AWESOME!!!! By any chance, ( cant remember his name for the life of me) was Quarts the first dragon during the war?
510474 Yep.
510483 Awesome! What do I win?
Two Pinkie Pies,
, don't spend them all in one place.
O_O DUDE!! Why you do that to Aurora?!
You made my mind flip in circles TWICE! Y U DO DAT? Eh, makes for a good story though. Poor Old Spin, may his soul rest in peace.
537273 I'm just on a killing spree now aren't I?
537381 Yes, Y U DO DAT?
EPIC!!!!!!!!!!!!
Holy shit man. I cant WAIT to see what happens!
Ohmaigahd...
DO I SPOT A CONAN REFERENCE?!?!?
If I could fave this twice, I'd do it in a heartbeat just for that...
564613 Indeed you did spot a Conan reference. But tell me, WHAT IS BEST IN LIFE!?
Klondike be pulling' the moves...
Eh, all our OCs do. Its a proven fact our imaginary characters are better at life then us...
Another, more volatile, note: EXPLOSIVES! Does my mention, and use, of TNT have anything to do with their advent in this story?
575284 I kind of figured that since a pony can have a demolition cutie mark, and that TNT isn't too high tech to be out of the limits of pony technology, that it would be logical that a mining operation would have a couple of sticks laying around.
575289 But only 6 seems, inadequate if you ask me (But I am a crazy lunatic so my opinion is fail). Another good chapter and I hope those bastard 'knights' get their asses handed to them on silver platters by a fancy butler.
575315 I figure that they would have stored the bulk of the explosives near or in a separate shaft of the mine, which has since been destroyed and completely collapsed. And dude, the knight is dead. He took an arrow to the back. I don't know what to do with Patsy at this point, maybe have him get eaten by wolves or something?
575563 Wow,things just seem to shoot right over my head. As for patsy, make so he goes completely nuts and is still wondering around at the end of the story. Thats always funny.
575563 He could always go up for redemption and perform some kind of obligatory heroic sacrifice (like say, jumping down the queen's throat with a lit stick of dynamite). Or if you just want to off him, have him stumble into the queen's warpath once they get that fire lit.
575688 Intriguing, a chance for redemption for the literal patsy.
575700 Well, that or he could follow Klondike around while banging coconut halves together.
575788 That was the intent originally, and the pun intended.
575802 But how would you get coconuts up in Northern Equestria? The coconut is a tropical fruit.
Also, what is the airspeed velocity of an unladen wyvern?
575809 Well a wyvern could have migrated and carried a coconut back!
And what do you mean? Male or female? (Still in character)
575867 I don't knooooooooooooooooooooooooow!
Dude, lets pray to god (or Celestia if you prefer) that they dont use their "powers" against us! Because our fall will be EMINENT!
589400 I prefer praying to the Earth Mother, or some days the Flying Spaghetti Monster when Mother doesn't feel like talking.
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Oh boy...
Join us for the sequel, where Klondike and Patsy ride forth to Canterlot!
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On second thought, never mind. 'Tis a silly place.
Awwww, it's over....
Why do I get the feeling there's a massive Game of Thrones reference in here...
639690 Don't see how I could have done that consciously, being that I have never even seen Game of Thrones or read any of A Song Of Ice And Fire.
639889 I swear I see House Stark in this.
Ancient race huh... I wonder...
Richard: THERE BE GOLD IN THEM THAR HILLS! And we are gonna get it out!
Please tell me that ending was a LotR referemce
852922 Actually, it was an Army of Darkness reference. You win a prize if you know that movie.