Twilight Sparkle brushes her teeth. Did you not get that from the title?
She thinks about some stuff too.
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Super Trampoline
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GUYS I'M REALLY HYPER RIGHT NOW. THIS SPACE RESERVED FOR ANY REASON I MIGHT NEED NOT THAT I CAN THINK OF ANY REASONS RIGHT NOW BUT YOU NEVER KNOW SO ITS BETTER TO BE ON THE SAFE SIDE.
WHAT IS THIS EVEN?!?!
6658847 Thanks. Here are some dental hygene coupons as thanks: commonkindness.files.wordpress.com/2012/11/reach-toothbrush-coupons.jpg
6658845 NO IT'S ODD!
6658867 IT'S ZERO, WHICH IS NEUTRAL
This is the strangest story about nothing that I've ever read. Interesting style.
6659247 I'll take that as a half-hearted compliment. :3
6659316
Well, you can take comfort in the fact that I did get a kick out of reading it.
6660379 YES I DiD
This is a shutter (as opposed to a shudder). Though if you keep it as-is it adds a grotesque feel. Like having a literal window shutter embedded in oneâs torso. Itâs 1am here, forgive me.
Anyway, this story was weird. It was confusing. The fourth wallâs nonexistent. I like it.
Little nitpicks:
7064683 thanks for the tips, fam
This was extremely interesting to read. I pretty much loved how the narrator acted and I loved the part about Twilight and Celestia and the book titles. Also all the times the narrator just randomly started ranting about stuff like little girls and STEM and Twilight's teeth and health and other stuff were pretty fun. Also the references to past episodes were good.
Good job.
7450018 that's my natural writing style, so I'm glad you appreciated it.