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Shadow Hero


I am but a nobody that likes ponys. Sunset is best human/pony. Profile Picture was drawn by a Streamer StephOfanime

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Klhan Star and his friend started to travel Kalos so his friend can get all the gym badges, but during their travels a flash of light appeared and he ended up at Canterlot High were he meets someone he knows.

Based off the story Sunset Shimmer and the land of Pokemon by The Skyrunner
Thank you to Nitro Indigo for proofread the first 2 Chapters
Skye Mist from chapter 3 and onward

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Based off the story Sunset Shimmer and the Land of Pokémon by The Skyrunner

Friendly word of advice, link to the previous story.

Where did you come up with the name Klhan Star?

6720075 Its just a name that I use, came to mind when watching someone play the Mod Project E for minecraftand makeing the star's the Youtuber was WTFG33K's...My pony OC name is Shadow Hero and klhan is my pokemon Trainer OC.

Interesting, I actually had an idea with Pokemon involving Hoopa, Primal Groudon, Rayquazza, Palkia, Latios, shiny metagross, and the starter Pokemon I got for omega ruby. But your idea is good as well, look forward to read more

Cassidy and Butch, the (slightly) more competent Jessie and James.

After this many chapters of enjoying the plot of the story, one thing has become clear: The story is excellent, but you need an editor. The only mistakes are in spelling, grammar, and punctuation. The amount isn't worrisome, as you always get the point across, but there are too many to just ignore. If all else fails, I'll help out with it, but only if you can't find anyone else. Due to me being busy with writing and - far more commonly - real-world work, I wouldn't be able to help edit very often.

For some reason, those third and second to last sentences make me think of Meloetta.

Cassidy and Butch. That was so obvious. So, Silver's dad is Giovanni?

6863174 Yes. It is cannon Giovanni is his father. Both in game and manga.

A Pokemon for Lyra?
I vote for Corsola or Aipom.:moustache:

How about a music Pokemon like Kricketune or Chimecho?

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Oh yeah! Chimecho! That would be cool.

Nice use of Eclipse there. I look forward to seeing more of this.

Nice chapter. When's Eclipse gonna return?

:scootangel:That's all I feel like doing right now.
And omg, how many girls keep on hitting on Klhan?:facehoof:

Good to see Eclipse is a man of his word.
Nice chapter.

Yay, Eeveelutions!:raritystarry:They're just so cute.:rainbowkiss:
I mean seriously, who wouldn't love these faces?
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Wait. :rainbowderp:
Shadow Sky? Shadow Chill? Never heard of those moves. Dang, who knew not playing the game could be such a wreck?:applejackconfused:
But anyways, Mars is back?!:pinkiegasp:She was always my favorite in the anime.:scootangel:
And an Articuno! Oh my god! The ice ruler has graced us with its presence.:raritystarry:

Soo...is Looker gonna make a show?:trixieshiftright:

6951147 They are moves from the Game Cube game Pokemom XD:Gale of Darkness. They only appear in that game and learend only by Shadow Pokemon.

6951394 That's probably why.:twilightsheepish:I never took much interest in the games.

Oh great, shadow pokemon.
If I don't get a shadow Houndoom I will be immensely disappointed

Very good story despite the minor grammar mistakes. Keep at it, grammar gets better as you go.:pinkiesmile:

I really hate to be downer, but you need an editor, other than that good story keep it up.

DAMMIT CLIFFHANGER!!!! I want to know what Rainbow got!!

I look forward to this project I'm being put in. I hope I also get a Dark Houndoom, that would be the best thing ever!

Shadow Pokemon can't Mega-Evolve? Interesting.:moustache:
And Gilda's just not having a break.:rainbowlaugh:
I know this is a selfish question, but when's Skye gonna make a show?

YES! A shadow Houndoom is mine! I'm very happy now.

I have a question...and this is gonna sound so selfish.:facehoof:
Are any Team Galactic members showing up? Disguised or whatnot? Or not at all?

7048190 What do you mean? As contestants, then no. Later on.......... To quote River Songs(The Doctor wife)- Spoilers.:twilightsheepish:.

7048215 No, not contestants. That's a no brainer, Team Galactic's not Team Rocket. But soon then, okay. I'll keep a close eye out

Ah, a tournament. I have a good feeling about this.

Looking good so far, story-wise.
And oh, I wonder who this Raven character is?:trollestia:

That last part. You have me intrigued...:duck:
And my face when that first battle happened: :trollestia:

"Who is L." Sunset asked as she took the letter

My question exactly.:unsuresweetie:

Sun and Moon anticipation translation for me:
*runs around room while TV is on Pokemon XY&Z or commercial of Sun and Moon*
I don't wanna waaaiiitttttt!!!!!!!!
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On a different note...
Raven, good job. *claps*
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A Sun and Moon Pokemon! Cool!:raritystarry:
I think I like Litten out of the three starters.

"I agree with you." Both Raven and Klhan turn around and saw Skye standing there next to her Serperior
"Then why fight then." Raven asked
"Look I have my reason's." Skye said looking up in to the sky
"Fine then. Shira Ice Punch." Shire ran up to Serperior to try to hit it but got wraped insted
"Look I don't want to fight you but.. I have to keep up this image." Skye said whispering the last part

:pinkiehappy:I am so psyched right now...

Question is why there was the bear suddenly.

"Hey. Rarity look what we found. Can I keep It?" the white one asked, holding up a squirrel like creature.

I see pokemons are invasive species. They will probably kill local animals and take their place.

I am internally squeeing a mile a minute.:pinkiehappy:

Pokemon... one red eye... human... no. No way. It can't be. It's Ghetsis, I think.

Isn't Looker their 'prisoner' now?

*gasps*

Oh my gosh! I can't wait for more! XD

Spike, really man? Such an old excuse, I'm ashamed of you.:trixieshiftleft:
...Use a new one!:derpytongue2:
He's gonna be like their Meowth.:rainbowlaugh:

OH! I JUST LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY!
MY THIRD FAVOURITE OF THE WHOLE FIMFICTION!
Each chapter made it more and more and more interesting! Stay AWESOME! :heart::heart::heart::pinkiehappy:

That's great and all, but..." Sara said, returning Staryu back into its Pokéball.

"What is it?"

"Where am I?" Sara asked.

the real question is How did she figure out how to use her hooves so quick?

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