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The Rarity of Starrs

After helping a customer find the perfect dress, Rarity takes a chance and learns a great deal about what really matters in life and how important what's on the inside can be

A short fic I wrote after being inspired by 'Canterlot Boutique' and the new background pony seen right at the end, Bright Starr

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TerraZeal

TerraZeal #1 · Nov 5th, 2015 · 1 · ·

This was wonderful. You actually made Bright Starr into somepony awesome, and not just a one-shot joke. I really like how her strange cutie mark shows that her talent is showing ponies that no matter what they look like, they'll know they're awesome and can shine like a star.

PonyPuffy 2012

PonyPuffy 2012 #2 · Nov 5th, 2015 · 1 · ·

This was amazing. I love how you transformed Bright Starr from a creator's gag into an actual character with dept and an interesting backstory. Rarity, Sassy and Fluttershy were good too and the addition of Bulk Biceps as Bright Starr's boyfriend was a nice touch too. In fact BulkStarr is now one of my new favorite ships