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Lokiz


Sigh... I have to write a short bio now... Tedious...

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Shorty after she confronted her mother, and realizing the error of her way, Diamond Tiara must repair all the relationships she destroyed with her wicked ways. A long voyage is ahead of this small pony as she seeks the path of redemption.

This takes place during the episode: Crusaders of the Lost Mark

*I re-edited this, better grammar now... I hope*

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 5 )

I can't believe she destroyed her tiara!! Hard to imagine her without it now....

This was an interesting chapter.
And, there isn't anything wrong that I noticed from a grammar perspective... but the scene where her Father refused to pay for the new equipment rubbed me the wrong way.
He's been shown to actually be a pretty good pony, who also cares about Diamond.
So, I won't dislike or unfavorite this story yet, seeing as how I AM interested in seeing where it goes.
But it's startling to lose some of the hope I had for it when I started tracking it.

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I see what you are saying. But, I want you think about this for second...

In her first appearance Filthy Rich never showed up to Diamond's Cute-ceaƱera. As well as with his only real in show speaking appearance, with the Zap-Apples, in which he completely threw Diamond under the bus. Filthy could have explained about Granny Smith in a way that didn't completely humiliate Diamond.
What I gleamed from this was that he acts civil towards her as a way to keep up appearances. He cares far more about the customers money and perceptions the about Diamond.

Plus he married Spoiled.... He can't be that good...

I feel that I am missing one of his appearances but I'm not sure.... Inform me if I have...

6633475 Fair enough. Until he has another speaking appearance, his true personality IS kind of up in the air.

As for him marrying Spoiled, for all we know he could have married her in order to keep her from mooching off of some other "poor" sap. but again, we won't really know for sure until he gets another appearance.

I am very much enjoying this story. I love the sound of DT trying to atone for her past sins... Hopefully, it's something that'll show up in the series too.

Keep up the good work :)

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