Twilight Velvet and Night Light are the proud parents of two spectacular unicorns! (One of them now an alicorn princess!) But what if there was something more to their life? Something dark.
What if the torturous, but victorious feeling of discrimination could segregate even the most joyous of families?
Starry Night was born on a cold day in the middle of winter. She seemed to be perfect! Beautiful, wavy mane, beautiful blue eyes, the sweetest smile. Twilight's family is put between a rock and a hard place as they discover that their newest family member is not a unicorn, but an earth pony. A simple earth pony in the family of gifted unicorns would not do! With that, they decided to drop Starry Night on the steps of an orphanage, and never speak her name once more. Bur soon, Starry Night learns about the power of friendship as her sister does, and she soon realizes that friendship, is more important than your past.
Ooh, I like where this is heading! Starry Night is so cute!!!!
Hmm... Night
Light doesn't sound like he was the best dad, though. I hope you continue soon!!!!!
Thank you very much! I will definitely continue soon!
6586232 Lol sorry, I never remember to actually hit the 'reply' button!
6586348 It's alright. Happens to me all the time! Thank you for following me! It means a lot.
6586403 No problem!
Keep going!
6589731 I'm working on chapter three now!
NO!!!!!! STARRY!!!!!!!!
WHY!?!?!!?! Okay, now that my essential freakout is over, I have something to say. THIS WAS FANTASTIC!!!!!! Brilliant work! I felt like crying along with Twilight Velvet, that's how good this was. I did notice one thing, however.
The phrase "after minutes" is used twice in the first sentence.
6590939 Thank you so much!!! You have no idea what that means to me! And thank you very much for pointing that out to me! I didn't even notice. Honest mistake, made by me. XD
6590939 Oh, and LOLZ!
6591142 No problem! I'm really enjoying this story, and looking forward to the next chapter. Keep writing!
6591374 Thanks! I'm just about to upload chapter three! :D
I wonder if when Starry gets to the age were she can leave, she would adopt Scootaloo?
Would be interesting if the Twilight family forgot about her... Would be sad for Twilight & Shiny
6594372 That would be awesome! I really WAS thinking about going that rout, but I wasn't sure.
6594396 I would do it because think of it.
She doesn't like Canterlot, she could fine out that her family (except mother) forgot about her. I guess making friends in the orphanage would be hard with the bullies being mean...
She would raise Scootaloo like a Mother.
Maybe she could meet a nice colt or go alone (with Scootaloo). To ponyville and live there.
Maybe her being a single would be a interesting story. With hardships of raising Scootaloo.
I don't want to ruin your story! Your doing amazing job so far!
6594589 maybe how she got to ponyville is because her roommates moved there.
6594594 Ooh, that's a good idea! And thank you. :)
I do already have a plot for the story, though. Maybe I can fit that in anyways!
6594821 cool! I can't wait to see what happens next
6594878 Woo! Team work high five! *high fives PlatinumPony*
Soooo cute! Baby Scootaloo sounds adorable!!!!! Nice work updating. You're doing really well!
6595634 Thank you sooo much! I'm so glad you like it!
Love the story so far. but one question though. Will there be a reunion between Mother and Daughter ( Twilight Velvet and Starry Night) in the future along with a reconciliation between the two and the family?
6664412 Hmm, that's a great question! I was actually pondering about adding that to future chapters, but I'm still not sure. Thanks for your support on the story!
WOW this story is awesome I can't wait for it to get more updates, but I do find that the fact scootloo being in canterlot kind of odd and with twi being 8 I don't think scoot would be born yet, but anyway shes cute and looking foreword for more updates for this story as well.
6765666 Thanks so much! I'll be sure to update soon.
6766060 Oh yeah! Duh, I suppose Scootaloo being in Canterlot is strange!
I had a huuuge derp moment there.
Merry Christmas!!!
6766293 you too!
6766313 Thanks
Awesome job and Merry Christmas!
6767356 Thanks!! And same to you!
Ooh, this is interesting. I wonder why Starry is so fascinated with Scootaloo. Great job, as usual.
6770975 Thank you!! Sorry it took me so long to reply. I've been super duper busy!
That sounds like she's going to completely forgive them despite their obscene discrimination and abandonment of her.
Yeah hell nnope.
Just....Nnope.
6967777 Lol yeah, sorry about that.
I just wanted to show Starry's kind nature. I really thank you for your input, though. All advice helps! 
6968888 My advice? Go the opposite route.
Looking through old stories and found this again. Man, it's been a long time seeing any updates. What's happening?