Life continues in its regular way, but for some being different is a bit more than it may seem.
Who can know what happens to John as he travels to find a truth he may not know what looks like?
I'am bad at descriptions i can see. Now I must trust that someone delves deeper below whatever the story looks like.
The first time i ever tried to write anything that makes any sense. I may have failed, but here it is for all to read. Please give me some feedback and tell me if i did something right or if royally screwed up somewhere. Anything helps.
If one needs context then the experiance of reading a thousand transformation fics is what inspired me, and then i needed to reflect on them all at once. However, my reflection has quite a lot to do with ponies, so that is quite good.
PS: None of the links are real as far as I know, neither is the email.
Wow. That there is pretty deep!
I can't really decide if this story was bad or good. Well, I say story, but it seems to be a bit more like one's own philosophical musings than anything. If nothing else, you seem to have a pretty good writing style, so if you wrote some more in the future I would probably give'em a look.
So you created another being as to cover for the fact that you didn't know much about your transformation?
This sounds really arrogant.
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Wasn't what I was thinking but I can actually see where you are coming from O.o
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In reality a drunken ramble on philosophy so fitting. Happy to know that the style seems good ^^
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I guess you got a point there.
Very interesting despite it having a share of problems. Dare I say...irregular?
That was... interesting...
There were errors in grammar and capitalization, but other than that, it was good
Actually kinda reminded me of The Stanley Parable
what. What. wat. Wat WAT. Rewind please. Skip then rewind. Forward... So this being of sorts is locked in a interdemensional-time fragment loop in which they will forever keep doing this process as if trapped in Alcatraz like cod zombies does *#* So they will forever seek regularity but they will always think their new world is irregular @0@
I'm so smart.
what. what. what. idontevenknowwhatijustread. My iq must not be high enough to even comprehend what was going on in this story. i loved it though, and the meta jokes did get a giggle out of me.
I brutally have to admit i skipped through most of this but i got some of the "***CONTEXT***"? not sure but i gotta say this was definetly more odd than the previous fanfictions i've read before, even the Alicorn in Canterlot Slow-burn Slice-of-Life story was easier to be understood and read than this
however i kind of like this story nonetheless because it's not like the others(they're all differentXD)