It never is easy to cope with loss and feel forgotten. For The Regulator, it is just like that.
Take a read to discover how and why The Regulator became what he is and what drove him to become it.
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- Member Since 3rd Oct, 2013
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Ribe_FireRain
Mental instability at its finest and aspiring punk rock musician. PS: Buy a creator a coffee to keep him awake? https://ko-fi.com/firerain
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not too bad really though it does seem a little clunky at times. the whole segment about blossom dying seems more like a factual reading than one of her best friend's thinking back to it.
there are a few places i can see that it needs a little bit of work done to smooth it out, but mostly it's pretty good except one thing that is killing me...
Now, if you'll excuse me, I have some regulating to do.
also, since he is retired from firefighting, what is he regulating?
6568030 Yes, I know, the worst thing that I've written. Amazing to actually see more likes than dislikes. Blossom and him were actually in a relationship and she died trying to save him and the idea was that when she did save him and ended up getting trapped herself (don't ask me how), he tried saving her but she died.
Since then, he has been trying to make up for her loss with regulating law enforcement where original law can't help or try to bother helping. I didn't detail much on that and I know it sucks. If you see it like I saw it, he is basically like a more daring Mare Do Well but looks more sinister and bulky in appearance.
I don't plan on going back to edit it, in fact I was going to remove it from my stories list.
6569119 it's not bad really, just clunky. don't delete it because that more likes than dislikes means that people like it and more would enjoy it
6570297 Clunky to me sounds bad probably because it is. As for the like-bar, I don't and do care.
I can and do do my best when it comes to writing, only annoyingly never seeming to improve with my attention to detail because I lack knowledge on them. Sad and gory and romances are really my kind of things to write.
As a one shot, I'm letting this one slide.