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Stunt Monkey


I own and tour with a travelling circus, the cool kind with performing animals and fire breathers. Not those crappy ones with ballet and shit. I also own a pet shop.

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Shining Armor has been waiting months for this day, Star Wars: The Force Awakens! The trailer has got him so excited, more excited than anything!

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Well, Obi-Shield Kenobi has gone over to the dork side. Ya' know for the pie.

:rainbowderp: What is life? :rainbowderp:

Read your Story. Loved it, dramatically read it, hope you like it.

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Was this whole thing just an oblique Skyla joke? If so, I approve. :D

7813350 Hahaha, I just listened to it. Great job.

Well, there are some mistakes in here, but it was a decent read. I can tell that you actually put effort into it, and the porn titles were kinda funny. Overall good one-shot, but one mistake stood out over the rest.

"On the day? Twiley, don't let all that Alicorn power go to your skull." he wiped his tears off his cheek with a hoof.

Who is talking here? Is it Shiny or Spike?

Also, you used the wrong "your" somewhere.

Have a nice day!

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Spike does not have hooves.

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Okay.

Just thought it was kind of weird having a new paragraph start right there.

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