I own and tour with a travelling circus, the cool kind with performing animals and fire breathers. Not those crappy ones with ballet and shit. I also own a pet shop.
The CMC are at it again! Another camping trip to celebrate the end of high school exams! And who better to tag along than Rainbow Blitz. Diamond Tiara = Gold Watch, the rest should be obvious.
Originally written for the THE IiW BUTT-SPELUNKON 20XX, but I missed the deadline.
Contains: Rule 63, Strong M/M shipping, Aged up.
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please continue i like it so far!!
Hey, I know I'd love to see more! I like what I see here! This doesn't even need to be smut; this has to be, like, the only story FiMFic has about Scooteroll and Blitz, and I'm thankful enough for that! A couple suggestions for your writing: Try to avoid comma splices, and read up on rules of dialogue punctuation and capitalization.
I think you meant to end "And who better to tag along than Rainbow Blitz." with a question mark, not with a period. Oh, and shouldn't this have the alternate universe story tag?
It was cute, but too short to really say whether I like it not. Keep at though, I'd like to see some r63 adventure/shippy tales.
I liked it. The concept is interesting and giving age and the possibility to add or retract anything from the cast's past is a cool idea. Look forward to reading more. And I empathize your opinions on smut.
Here are my queries and/or edits.
3607037 Yeah thank for pointing it out. Fun Fact: this was originally never rule 63.
I loved it!
I think it would be great if you continued.
This freaking story cool!! :3 how long do i need to wait until the next chapter is done. XD
4769083 I did actually have 2k works written for another chapter but my iPad needed to be reset, I have a backup of the text but it was an old backup(only 100 words), I guess I just sort of lost inspiration after that. I think I'll write up some more, but I can't be bothered editing and pre-reading so much. I remember this one time I went though a story of mine seven, SEVEN!, times, and still got stuff wrong.
4769190 ok man thats cool :3
i like it though it could use more clop scenes
6025063 I didn't want to make it Mature, I think I already pushed it to the limit.
6026635 how so