Working for royalty is never easy, it becomes even harder when said royalty is trying to get me to marry their daughter who hates me for some reason. It becomes almost impossible when my neighbors want me for themselves. I hate this planet.
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May want to get a editor to pick over this a little, tried to read it but kept having the flow and enjoyment stumble and sputter when I try to read poorly structured sentences such as.
Just...well quite a few right there. It makes reading difficult and I had to stop at that point. Still interested in seeing the new chaps but I think I'll wait a few days to let the rough edges get smoothed over.
Funny that halfway through the chapter i thought it would be nice if they had some firebombs to use in a world populated entirely by sentient balls of fur/feathers,
iirc didn't Ian have a "secret project" to make a personal handgun or something? Why does every hooman tries to skip immediately to firearms, without even having proper machining and metalworking tools JUST to make them? (and probably die after a catastrophic malfunction)
Heck, these burbs may only have a crate of rudimentary incendiary bottles, but what if you standardized fire or powder bombs in the military doctrine of a flight-capable species? Or introduced repeating crossbows which lose their only downside (reduced kinetic force per shot) when shot air-to-ground thanks to gravity? What would any ground-based species do against an airship with hilariously overpowered engangement range pelting them with repeating ballistas, even powder cannons or just bombs from high above, full of catbirds ready to go blitzkrieg if you somehow manage to pose a threat to it?
Ian needs to make some serious reconsideration and suggestions when he gets back if he wants himself and his subordinates to have a better chance to making it out alive or at least projecting enough force to deter most foes from casually murdering entire towns just because they were in the way of their minotaur chase.
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Sadly for him his project is in his room at the castle. With the idea of trying to avoid using it. Pandora's box and all. A repeating crossbow is not something even he could make. With magic probably but with human ingenuity then no it's not possible. With steam maybe but something simple like the drop feed Robin hood bow attachment would be the closest he could get to that.If the griffins have a blast furnace then ya he can make a fire arm. There not complicated. Also a good bomb is more then just how much gunpowder can we cam in it?