Working for royalty is never easy, it becomes even harder when said royalty is trying to get me to marry their daughter who hates me for some reason. It becomes almost impossible when my neighbors want me for themselves. I hate this planet.
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Holy shit....well that just happened.
Four new chapters!
Chapter bomb!!!
This chapter is very good, and both ominous and very enlightening at the same time.
I for one am happy to see that you've recovered. May your hands be fruitful, mister author!
That was an unexpected but welcome surprise, thank you for continuing this story!
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Not anymore.
*<>* It Lives ..
Seriously need moar stories featuring griffons
Loving it so far. I like how he's feeling like a teacher just learning that they have to teach multiple (if not all) subjects to a class instead of just one subject.
Holy shit! Four chapters in one!
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loving the story so far but I should mention that from my own experience, it seems to add this over the top stuff always brings down a story, or at least stops it from being the best it could be.
as an example, I think it should have just been
adding the rest is just overdoing it and makes it feel weak. at least this is from my own experiences from reading stories on fimfic
other such examples like this
remove the "even" it just makes it sound like he's thinking of himself as a badass. no badass thinks that way, just wannabees
not trying to be a cunt or anything, just giving what i think is constructive criticism
did you mean insolated as in
"to expose to the rays of the sun," 1620s, from Latin insolatus , past participle of insolare , from in- "in" (see in- (2)) + sol "sun" (see Sol). Related: Insolated ; insolation .
or isolated?
also was the mention of those that attacked knights being killed and their property given to the knight....did that have any relevance? any importance? I once heard from a writer that anything that has no purpose, no matter how small, should not be put into a story, everything needs a purpose, from why a spoon is mentioned in a kitchen to the protagonist noticing the evil demon king has a long rope. it all needs some reason for being there, for being noticed and mentioned
Good job with the update.
Now hoping that griffons manage to pull themselves out from the gutter, where the loss of the idol and (idiots in) other races pushed them in.
That is one awesome "late" new years present. Thank you very much!!!!
Very happy to see more chapters! This story is great and I'm excited to see more!
I love stories like these, world building, politics and slice of life. Yours is no different. Really looking forward to the coming chapters.
Epic string of chapters. Great work mate!
No worries mate.
I hope he gets his own Flock ( harem ) he Deserves it for all the work he’s going to put into this
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Huh. Would it be called a flock, or a pride?
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Other griffins have an owl or falcon like feet features well so I think flock or pride may have to be gender Pacific like a group of hens called the flock But once they have their young I guess you could call it a pride
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You'd probably like this, then;
- Equestria Girls
- Adventure
- Comedy
- Thriller
Of all the people it had to happen to...I don't usually root for harems but I'll be damn if this man doesn't deserve it. Now then I wonder how far ahead he's about to launch their metal working industry. Maybe some more effective ways of mining and farming too. Maybe even a blunderbuss? Nah that might be a bit much but crossbows and compound bows would be a nice low tech improvement. Maybe some ultralight weight arrow plans? Could even go over the top and have them build a turbine and put that sucker near that windy abyss where the idol was and get the beginnings of an electrical grid in the works.
I'm eagerly awaiting to see what he picks out and what he deems to advanced.
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Ditto!
That was fun, may I have another? Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
Hello darkness my old friend, I’ve come to laugh at you again. LOL!
There goes the prime directive right out the window xD
Welcome back Roran
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It would probably be a 'Pride', because the pegasi have 'Flocks' and the earth-bound ponies have 'Herds'. Griffons generally don't like being compared to ponies so I doubt they would use 'Herd'. Unless 'Pride' is more in reference to a 'Clan', as in family and extended relations, and 'Flock' in reference to multiple beings in a close [romantic?] relationship.
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/:-| Really?
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It's a different take on displacement, combining an MLP TF with a displacement to the EqG universe.
...needs more chapters.
Anyways awesome story so far an want to see more! Keep up the grate work!
Wow good job more new chapter's.
It is rather hard to impress me but you have my interest I do enjoy the Griffins Deus vult infidel
More please
When is the next chapter in this guy's f@cked Life
Your story is awesome!
Bruh, find an editor! Some of these run on sentences are offensive to the eyes.
More More I want the human to introduce AT-AT WALKER AND STAR DESTROYERS so that no one except from star wars could defeat the griffons
:3
Will this story continue?
Update?
Dead?
Dead?
And finally caught back up to this plot so I can read the new chapters!
if you were a forerunner from halo that would just be a leap so big that I wouldn't be funny
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He better not "Flood" the market then
Blueballs!
I’m quite interested in what the griffon’s export situation actually is. I know it’s probably a boring detail, but for some reason I can’t help but wonder about these particular world building details.