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SoSoft
I write smut. Fluttershy is sexiest pony.
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6553215 Double no.
6553215 Why?
6553297 Double why?
I'd like to know why you decided that a single or double worded response was adequate to relay the criticism that you wish to bring forth. I'd also like to know what part of the story you found warranting writing the equivalent of slashing my work when my back was turned.
I just hope this was a knee-jerk reaction that you had little to no control over that activated the moment you read 'transgender' and 'Rainbow Dash' in the same sentence, and not some long thought out conclusion that was developed after reading through the piece I worked so hard on.
Please at least tell me what I could do better, so I can find some way to remove the knife you stabbed into my words.
6554120
People don't like pieces that deal with serious social issues in a shallow, unoriginal way. Hey, your story may not be shallow or unoriginal (I didn't read it, I just knew the comments would look like this). If it isn't, then your description does a poor job conveying that.
6554207 I suppose that is true, but I wasn't aiming for doing that in the story. I wanted the story to have more of a purpose above just 'Rainbow grows a dick', I wanted it to mean something. To have some more deeply rooted emotion behind the intent.
Oh well, at least you gave a reason, thanks for that. I'm going to lie down and think about what I had inadvertently done.
6554276 What does that mean? Does the story have too many straight lines?! I don't know what to do about that! Why can't you just tell me what you want?!
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Seriously though, that's a bit annoying.
I like the story, but hate the concept of trannies. Freaks need mental help not mutilating themselves.
Considering how most of your detail seemed to go into the physical act of the transformation instead of... The emotions of the everything in general... I think you should write porn instead
6554437
I understand what you're going through here.
After reading this story, I can say that it's not that bad. Pretty good, actually. I feel like people are just being turned off straight away by the 'Transgender' part.
This story really runs into one, big problem: Transgender is something that needs a big, emotionally filled story line to handle the idea and make the reader comfortable. This story, on the other hand, is a short and rather shallow clop fic- not ideal if your intent is to have some
sexy times
.
Is this story even intended to be erotica?
If not, then I apologize, but I get the sense that's where the following chapters are going.
You know what? I've really taken a liking to you. I've been in the same place you once were before. I want to help you.
My suggestion (if you want more views/more support) is to change this story to futa. That way, people will give this story more of a chance, be more comfortable with it, and it gives a nice opportunity for the FUTAshy pun
Although, if you're intending to go for the deep, emotion filled alternative of this story, then my suggestion would be to make this story far, far longer and with a slower pace.
Either way, I wish you all the best.
6554120 It's not a knock against transgender individuals. It's the fact that, straight after 'his' transformation into a dude.
Sex.
6554698
Now that I think about it, it's probably a good idea that I redo the chapter and get rid of the transgender aspect, it really didn't have that much of an effect on the story as a whole and it isn't really a part of the themes.
6554724
One tiny part of my mind did say that the subject matter of being transgender wouldn't pull through that well, but the larger, more excited-to-be-writing part of my brain assured me that it would be fine. The larger part is now reconsidering its life choices while listening to the tiny soundtrack of "I told you so! I told you so!".
It is intended to be erotica, and yes, the next chapter will be much, much more tuned towards it.
Well, I won't go so far as to change it to Futanari, if by that you mean that I should tape a penis onto Rainbow Dash (I'm not exactly well versed in Internet pornographic lingo). A girl with a penis is not something that I'd enjoy writing about, that's why the full change will stay, but Rainbow won't be transgender in the story.
After the change though, she will be referred to as a he (for sake of not confusing the pronoun use).
In any case, I thank you sir, I intend to reach for the best, giving only my best.
6555392
... Your point? The actual sex hasn't happened yet though, that's saved for next chapter.
6555898 Kinda cheapens the whole psychological struggle and shit, just making it an excuse for Dash to have a dick and fuck Twi.
6556188 Correct, hence, I'm removing the psychological aspect.
6555898
Yes, but what most people do is have a spell be used to 'tape a dick to Rainbow Dash'.
Again, I wish you all the best for this story.
I like the idea of Rainbow Dash as FtM. It's not the sort of thing that takes much finagling, since she's already a tomboy in the show. It's also kind of adorable how Twilight works so hard to come up with a solution, though a bit odd that she's the first pony to ever do it. She clearly wanted to get Dash into the right body so she could jump his bones, but that's still an adorable kind of affection. Like she is honestly, innocently trying to help a friend, and doesn't even realize that her desires are pushing her to do a bit more than just a simple act of friendship. The stereotype would be for her to have unreasonable expectations, and he rejects her due to just not being the pony she thinks he is. I don't know if her expectations are unreasonable though, since they're already good friends, and could make quite a good couple, even if ponies start to gossip that Twilight is so extremely heterosexual, she'd even change her lover into a dude.
I think you should ignore the haters saying someone doesn't count as a trannie if they don't have a miserable life, and their desire to change sexes totally doesn't count if it isn't an obsession. Transsexuality doesn't always have to be a mental disease. It's actually perfectly fine if someone wants to change sex just for fun, or for petty reasons, and the only reason it doesn't happen in reality is because there's no way to do it! This story doesn't disrespect anyone, or demonize trannies or anything, so anyone who gets offended I think it's their problem, not anything about this story.
6565355 What you've said encourages me Mr Ferret, however, you are one of the few people that believe the way you do, and unfortunately, I have to respond to what the masses believe if I want anything I write to be successful. Though, I won't drop the theme of transgenders completely out of my mind, just from this story. I do eventually want to write something that touches on that in the land of ponies, something that probably won't be a clopfic all things considered.
Thanks for your kind words good sir!
6567410
As you will. I just didn't want you to think everyone thought that way.
6567410 I'm with ferret on this one. The idea that it's somehow 'wrong' to use themes of transgenderism in erotica strikes me as kind of laughable. I mean, sure, it can be done poorly, but so can everything else.