Seems a little rushed, but not bad. :)

nice

Like I said, hated only because those same constant lovers don't like change.

I guess this story is dead

6924959 Not dead just lack of inspiration on what to write.

6926988 aw I do want more of it

i wonder how everyone in equestria would of reacted if they learned that twilight was telling the truth...*makes a sinister smirk* ill make sure to have popcorn ready for it