Beetlejuice Vs. Discord!

After being humiliated at school, the Cutie Mark Crusaders go to Zecora's hut in search for something that can make themselves get even with Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon; and they find it in the form of a book with the word "Betelgeuse" enscribed upon it. The instructions were simple: say Betelgeuse three times. But as soon as they did, they didn't know that they were about to bring forth a disaster that only the master of chaos can fix.

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Dr Yeis

Dr Yeis #1 · Oct 6th, 2015 · · ·

still made at me

I believe it's "mad". I'm still reading through it. Other than that, it looks utterly fantastic so far. Also, I think the same person/pony has to say Beetlejuice three times for it to work. At the end of the original Beetlejuice movie, Adam says Beetlejuice almost 3 times but before he can say it a third time, he's teleported away. Barbara says Beetlejuice almost three times, thus only the same person can summon/get rid of Beetlejuice in that fashion. Sorry to be so nitpicky.

Dr Yeis

Dr Yeis #2 · Oct 6th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Hm...this was surprisingly good. It may have a few errors (I'm no editor though...) but it was a very nice read. I shall put it in my hall of approval.

HumanSVD

HumanSVD #3 · Oct 7th, 2015 · 1 · ·

This was hilarious as shit. You got the characters spot on, Beetlejuice was awesome. The fight scene was great. All my likes belong to this. Bravo! The best I've read in awhile.

Comment posted by Kadziet deleted Oct 7th, 2015

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