There are somethings that can't be explained. Crop circles. UFOs. Pinkie Pie. And then, there's this rolling renegade. Check your bushes, fillies and colts; there might be a Rammus waiting.(Reader's POV is from Rammus's) Rammus's POV is 2nd Person.
League of Legends / MLP crossover. Not your cup of tea? Mo'kay.
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Ha! Nice one, don't recall Rammus talking much, but hey, I think it's a nice piece of work.
Would be funny if somewhere down the line Rammus goes into a monologue that shocks everyone so much the problem is solved! XD
Came expecting tremors stayed for the spike turtle
Keep rollin'.
"Okay."
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Yeah.
Bad response to that question, big guy... Beware the Purple-Pony-Princess, and her sparkly-ie wrath!
Suddenly, massive repair bills for the walls of wherever he is going to be held.
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Uh-oh. They're gonna get it when rammus escapes.
Darn, I thought this was going to be a Tremors crossover.
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Heh, sorry. The name actually stemmed from Rammus's Ulti/R Key Skill, Tremors. Specifically, it's a small earthquake that damages foes in a set radius.
Rammus+Ponies=M'okay
Ok. That gif is definitely fitting. And now we know what happened to the cabbage salesmen(pony).
YOUR STORY SUCKS!
... I'm kidding. Hehehe. I'm just looking at this as promised, because, well, it doesn't look that bad!
The writing is pretty good. I'm pretty impressed, actually, because a lot of the time, the writing just flows smoothly as the story goes on. There are moments where "be" verbs are used when it could easily be avoided, but I'm not an English teacher. Still, it's best to try not to use those verbs as much as possible, unless you have to or you think it works. Even then, it's not used that much, so good on you! I won't go into too much or nitpick on mistakes, because for me, it seems like it's going good here, mechanics wise! I have yet to see any story, but that's for later. Friggin' homework, getting in my way of pony fanfics...
My only big problem is this:
*Would have... personally, I despise that mistake. I just... I'm good, I'm good.
The only thing that keeps me from enjoying this story over others is that is in second person. I just can't get invested in those. But since I won't judge it on that alone, I'm looking forward to more, even though I don't know about this crossover, I'm willing to look at it.
Oh, and this:
That... that was just brilliant. I lost it.
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I appreciate the constructive criticism and the compliments!
Also, the irksome line was fixed.
And, with the semester in full swing, my story updates are going to be slow. Concerning the 2nd person perspective, it's an exercise in it. However I might end up rewriting them as 3rd person (Trixie, get over here...)
Seems legit. All of it is very humorous! I done applaud you and awards you 50 points! Congrats! :D
You cant update this now after like a year
dont even remember what happenend
I liked the start of the fic. I used to be pretty big into LoL a few years ago. I used to be a Taric player never was to big into Ramus . . . I think that's his name.
Anyway good job, I'll read more later on.
Was a good story, however you completely screwed the ending up. The beginning was mildly interesting, but it seems like you got more and more bored with the story, and gave up entirely. For this you get an F.