I don't read a whole lot of fanfiction, but perhaps that just means fresh ideas?
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inb4
This is very hard to read due to your paragraphs not being separated out.
6469026 Wow, okay! Is it specifically with the dialogue or do I just need to space out each paragraph one more time?
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Hard to tell who is doing what or who is saying what because it's all together. Separate what Twilight is doing and saying from what Celestia is doing and saying. ^_^
Also, leaving space between paragraphs helps a ton. You kinda stopped doing that after a while.
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...WTF!?
I'm scared and confused.
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Seriously, it's like an acid trip but without the acid. Just a whole lot of tripping.
After watching that I feel like I need to share this now out of principle.
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Well, whaddaya expect from Imatoonlink? Here's another of his/her creations:
6469133 WTF did I just watch?
6468289 Literally the first thing i thought of when I saw the title too XD
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6469114 You too haven't even seen the SFM Version