As if you could Stop Me

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WUBZ-_-Vinyl

WUBZ-_-Vinyl #1 · Sep 28th, 2015 · · ·

So is this the one you were talking about yesterday?

Violent Skin

Violent Skin #2 · Sep 28th, 2015 · · ·

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yep

Hopeful_Ink_Hoof

Hopeful_Ink_Hoof #3 · Sep 29th, 2015 · 4 · ·

Biggest thing: if you're going to have this be a major character, you should really give him a name. Calling him "son" the whole time gets a bit tiring.

Violent Skin

Violent Skin #4 · Sep 29th, 2015 · · ·

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ah, I see.

WUBZ-_-Vinyl

WUBZ-_-Vinyl #5 · Sep 29th, 2015 · · ·

Nice I like it

Pink Rocket

Pink Rocket #6 · Sep 29th, 2015 · · ·

This fic lacks an OC tag

MrDestiny80

MrDestiny80 #7 · Jan 23rd, 2016 · · ·

Don't mind me saying this but ... I get the idea (a mother raping her son), I kind of get the premise ... what I don't get is WHY RARITY? She does not seem (at least in my opinion) like the type of pony which would do this.

I would recommend keeping the idea but either going for an OC or another character ... and adding some backstory.

Still, entertaining read.

Captain Whatever