• Member Since 21st Sep, 2015
  • offline last seen Oct 11th, 2015

Twilight the alicorn


I am a beginning writer, who is only 10 years old, so please be nice to me in your comments. I am here because I love to write and I love to watch MLP! Negative comments will be deleted and ignored!

Comments ( 5 )

I really hope you like the story and see you in the next one~Twiliy T.

Comment posted by ObeyBunny deleted Oct 10th, 2015

You can read chapter 2 it's much better.

Good, needs to improve grammar though.

"I'm primed, locked, loaded, and ready to go!''Rainbine said in her robot voice.

This sounds very familiar.

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