After 1000 year of not knowing true love King Sombra finds it in a unicorn filly named Lucina who is the youngest daughter of Princess Cadance and Shining Armor.
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The story is a good read so far... And the name definetly has to come from Fire Emblem.
Eh Not as keen on this one to be honest this chapter seems rushed
6683210 that maybe so however I promise you that the next chapter will be worth it
6684215 im actually amazed by somethings else at the moment. But tell me will the next chapter blow my mind will it keep me at the edge of my seat.
6684233 you'll see
6684254 but but I need to know and seriously I was more amazed at something else but you aren't curious about that are you and I suppose I'm arty on the edge of my seat
6684265 so what did you like about this chapter
6684270 since your asking character development is great the story is progressing well just don't rush your writing.
6684270 when you rush your writing you can damage your story take your time. The story is great you are doing a good job as for what amazed me well I guess you will have to wait to find out what that was
Marefriend ? Did you make up a new word for this, I like it
Ok so every time I read this I keep thinking that they we'll find somdar (sorry bad spelling) and the priess in the snow with sombar laying next to the priess, keep her warm, the priess will wake up a few montents before they get there. Once they get there they have an argument about what to do. Then they take sombar to the cellar and say she can't go visit him. And she and him run away,
That is all I got, and again sorry for misspelling.
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And no that word is like girlfriend in the pony world and is used many many times by other people
6753124 Thanks for the recommendation I'll keep that in mind as I'm writing this next chapter.
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Speaking of which when is that coming
>>Book Lover 1994
It was just a thought but thanks for the thought and Merry Christmas everypony
Nice chapter loving the inner thoughts
" this filly is a real smart ass" 
that is real funny too
and
Sombra *
Well done chapter. Love all the magic and stuff. And really loving the inner thoughts.
And it's ok to take your time on the chapters just don't take too long. 
Anyway good job on the story
yoy rushed again and congrats on the job i suppose
This is a great story so far, I am already in the edge of my seat.
This story is really good, you have kept me on the edge if my seat every chapter. Great work
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This was a pretty good chapter. Still loving to hate thunder clap.
Also loving the ponies who are running form *pony land* live with Sombra. The band of criminals. Loving it.
**dont feel like looking for the pony land name**
Looks great reads great can't complain a couple of spelling errors that was it other wise it's great I like the detail you are adding to the story it's developing very well
It's actually not rushed at all kinda like the cliff hanger there like there's more to the chapter but it's the sense of suspense that keeps you wanting more
Yay it's back
For future reference, that's spelled "chaise"
Edit:
And the word you're looking for here is "tour"
And that's spelled "Masquerade"