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This is an interesting piece. There is something very wrong with the main character but he does seem to want things to change.
I was wondering when I read his thoughts on Moon dancers schedule, whether he was also talking about himself.
For all that through, it does feel a little incomplete. Is Xavier going to report his doc for malpractice? Does Xavier get his job back? What of Moondancer?
For me, it just reads like a beginning and a middle, without an end.
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That was the thing I worried about most while writing this. I knew that this would be incomplete, but this story is a test of my writing abilities after I took an extended hiatus because of a job sucking everything out of me. I can gladly say that they're still intact, however that leads me here.
Do you want to see this story continue?
Also, Xavier was just talking about Moondancer's schedule.
6547134 Ah, fair enough. Hm, I think I'd enjoy seeing more of this but only if you would enjoy writing it. If something else strikes you then I'd be happy to read it honestly. I just really enjoyed the style.
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Thanks! That means the world to me to know that I don't suck as a writer.
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Much appreciated, sir!