When Octavia returns from the store with some Candy, she discovers that Vinyl Scratch has a very interesting way of decorating for Nightmare Night.
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Question: Why upload this all the way on Halloween?
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You didn't read the story, did you?
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I did, yes. But I'm still confused why not just make it completely Halloween? Though it is funny, I'm just asking where you got the inspiration for a holiday mashup?
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I got the idea a while back, thinking of a changeling trying to integrate him or herself into pony society, but not knowing about holidays or things of that ilk. Hence, this changeling thinking that it's Hearth's Warming.
Interesting story. I feel like the pacing was a bit off, and the paragraphs could use spreading between them. Not a bad story though.
that was fun. I laughed a little too hard at the em dash bit, and I may have yelled "hah, fourth wall", but there's no proof of that yet. I'd initially wondered how Octavia knew it was a turkey but it became less of an issue as I kept reading.
I'm glad this came out for Halloween, I dig the deeply-rooted logic in a ludicrous (if feasible) situation because it was only the writing that made it so outrageous. good stuff.
I liked the comedy aspect of this story, you did good with that part. As for your vocabulary, I'm amazed that you somehow managed to incorporate the word "vociferated" into this. And just as a matter of personal preference, I'd enjoy it a bit more if the paragraphs were spaced, it's straining on my eyes,
In any case, I liked it.
Good laughs for a cold November night. Keep it up!
Nice short random read. I like the idea of changelings being alien to pony traditions!
Just be aware that you have there two of the doll-themed sentences near each other. That seems a little unnecessary and repetitive.
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That was on purpose.