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AnonymousAlicorn


Nope. Just an alicorn for a walk. Nothin to see here. I spend most of my time writing and listening to music, and try to get around school.

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Vinyl was widely known as the only girl who had never shown her eyes. She was also the 2nd best girl at soccer in the team, and nearly the 2nd best player in the school. At the moment, 3 certain girls found their way into the locker room, and they had a grudge. We all know how bad this will go.

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There's a lot of filler shit

but they were waterproof so it doesn't matter

and grammatical errors but it's a pretty good plotline. You got their characters spot on and I would really like to see this with more polish.

You lost me when they trying to get back at indigo

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