Vinyl was widely known as the only girl who had never shown her eyes. She was also the 2nd best girl at soccer in the team, and nearly the 2nd best player in the school. At the moment, 3 certain girls found their way into the locker room, and they had a grudge. We all know how bad this will go.
There's a lot of filler shit
and grammatical errors but it's a pretty good plotline. You got their characters spot on and I would really like to see this with more polish.
You lost me when they trying to get back at indigo