you know its sad when you admit how clichéd your story is as the short description

6405883 But it's a good example of why cliches aren't necessarily bad.

6406254 fair enough

Amazing as always.
I was doing math homework and I got frustrated so I checked fimfic and this was like a reward. Better than sweets.

Cloud Kicker had scored a great goal. Rainbow had made sure to tell her friend so. Her whole team was tight and they were going to bring home the cup. Though she had her head in the game, Rainbow just knew Twilight was watching.

Is there ever such a thing as scoring a bad goal?

Rainbdrops

RainDrops.

Written in 2.5 hours after trawling my old favourite MLP fanarts. I am trying to get around a little block on Days so thought I would write some fluffy Twidash to keep my hand in.

Fluff is always fun.

That was a lovely piece. Warm, fuzzy and romantic. I perfect pic me up. Have an upvote, and a good day

Very nice,
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Cheers all! I might do a follow-up or two if the fancy strikes me. I enjoy it when I can turn out a couple of pages of short story, makes me feel like I can achieve something when drudging through other works. Your comments are kind and helpful. I'll fix what errors there are and others I have noticed, that will be sometime in the next few hours.

I just wish people would comment why they downvote. It is pretty frustrating to not know why. I know that the ratio means there isn't any real harm, but maybe it would make people think twice before instant down for whatever reason. (Ew humans? Ew TwiDash? Ew AU? Who knows, it isn't like I tagged it wrong) .

Ho hum.

I don't really see how this is cliched - this quite creative in my opinion, then again I have. Been able to find much good high school TwiDash so...

Also underneath the story was an advertisement for a Daring Do plushie with 'free shipping' XD

Well, it was certainly cute
Good luck with further writting, gonna go check your TwiDash stuff out

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I take it from the 13 notifications that you're looking through the lot!

I like to write I like it when people enjoy my scribblings.

Thanks

>>Cirrus Sky
Yeah, althought not only TwiDash drew my gaze at itself

Loved it! =D