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Sorry for the delay. This kinda lingered in editing for a while. On the plus side, the first draft of the next chapter is done, so it should come a bit quicker.
Anyway, enjoy Whisper diving into some crazy action-packed data-analysis befitting of a Fallout: Equestria hero!
Oh shit, new chapter. I still haven't read the last one.
Excellent. Anxiously waiting for the next chapter.
Already said what I wanted to say on reddit, but just in case you don't check in there often; great writing as always, PD. Keep it up.
What's on second watch, and I don't know is on third.
Omg she's adorable.
is this purely drawn from just FOE or does it accept the events of project horizens as well?
alot of the more recent fics tend to but i just thought id ask to be sure.
Oh happy day! A new chapter!!!!!! n ou t so much action, but certainly enough tension in preparation for what's coming! Xd
Next chapter we get to the main battle lines! HOORAH!!! xp
Can't wait!
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Woo! Data analysis! ;P
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Just the original. I haven't read Project Horizons.
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The next chapter of one of my fav fics coming quickly is always a good thing!
"under guard in the makeshift bridge"
"under guard in the makeshift brig"?
Whisper is such a great character. Often when authors write extremely logic-driven characters, they go overboard and make them seem cold and robotic. Whisper isn't like that. She's not unemotional, it's just that she self-analyzes herself so often that she's really good at portraying herself the way she wants to be seen. It's a perfect personality for a changeling.
Another awesome chapter.
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Whoops! Fixed
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Thank you! That's one of the things I really wanted to avoid with Whisper. I wanted her to be a very analytical type, but the cold-and-robotic mannerisms that seem so common for such characters can be a bit of a problem for an Infiltrator! Especially for a love-collector who generally likes ponies. Granted, some of the other characters might perceive of her as being cold or callous, and for good reasons, too. But I liked the idea of portraying someone who's both emotionally well-rounded, yet still analytical and calculating. Perfectly able to dissect someone's motivations and intentions, but not cynical about it. It's kind of like a middle-ground between Sky and Nictus, and it makes her really fun to write.
Wow, that's a cliff hanger and a half. Great chapter though, I always enjoy Whispers character.
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I'd certainly recommend reading the original first. While this story doesn't directly build on the events in that story, it does build off some of the background setting and history. You might be able to figure that stuff out from context, but the story does kind of assume the reader is at least passingly familiar with the history presented in the original. So it might work just reading this one, but I'd highly recommend reading the original before this one.
Though I'd recommend reading it even if you don't read this one, because it's a good story!
More Bloodbeak is always welcomed, hope you keep fleshing her out.
This is one of the only large stories I’m following that still regularly updates and I gotta say that you’ve done an amazing job so far, definately in my top 3 favorites. I try to shill this fic every chance I get since you clearly deserve it.
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i highly recomend it, its an emotional rollar coaster ride, be prepaired to be amazed, disgusted at times perhaps, and to have the feels turn on repeatedly
here visual ponies' reading of it is really amazing so if you have something you can do while listening to it, its worth it just be aware its uber long like almost twice as long as FO:E
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qTEWa9SMZMM&list=PLHhCfjGyNGAUiNcSATIkToEw1_4l_vMyw
i am still keeping my fingers crossed for the full queenification of whisper... that would be so awsome!
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Definitely pack the Prozac though, because GOD it's dark.
Tsun Echo?
Toss lots of EMP and impulse. Knock all enemy tech off-line, storm with as much collat damage as possible. Use impact grenades to blast out any positions, take no prisoners. Use fire with prejudice, any pretenders to being dead will burn with the rest. Generally, cause casualties, destroy all not necessary gear, and burn everything once done. Then demolish the place.
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Huh, fimfiction never told me you replied. Well, guess I will go read FO:E now.
This has been quite a trip. Excited to see it continue towards the end!
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Oh! Sorry, that would be my fault. Well, kinda. FiMFiction does a weird thing where if you reply to a comment on a different chapter (Such as yours being on chapter 1 and mine being on the story page and therefor counted as the latest chapter, 40), then the person being replied to doesn't get a notice. I completely missed that you'd posted on chapter 1 or I would have posted there.
Anyways! I'm glad you're enjoying the story, and I hope you enjoy Fallout: Equestria, too
Bloodbeak's personality doesn't really match her name, I Suspect she's a changeling infiltrator of a third hive...
Wheeeee! Here we go again
Well, it's been shot down, patched up, attacked and invaded, and almost scuttled mid-flight. Poor thing
I'm really wondering what Echo was like before she was an alicorm... it would be interesting if any of that ever resurfaced.
These guys are so freaking professional
"Ow. So that's been hurting all the time?"
"No; only when I laugh."
They could try waking up one of the others and making 'em think they'd been rescued
Oh my goodness! They killed a food critic!
...more crypto?
Wut.
Ohh. The simulated worlds. Interesting!
Dun dun dunnn!
Remarks and corrections:
> It was gone an instant later as the flashed a grin at Echo.
as "the" flashed a grin? I susepect that should probably be "she"?
So... how long will it take the cast to realise that Bloodbeak is Laughter? I mean she is screaming Pinkie Pie just a light edition with no sugar at all. A few stories have tried to pull a deus ex woth the elements in the 3act, and I would normally fear that fate happening to this story as well, but honestly does it feel like you use the elements as bricks in a good foundation for a better world to live in, instead of fuel for an üpper powerful secret weapon.
"I don’t want mislead you" Is it not missing a "to" or is this some quicky English that I just don't know of, wouldn't be the first time.
" imagining some guiding hand of fate that brought some sort of purpose and order to everything and which was guiding everything to its desired and likely unpleasant end." I can't remember if they use the term or not, and even if Whisper is more of a free thinker do I not think that hands would be so common.
> The chances of them telling me anything useful is slim
Should either be "chance", or "are slim".
You know something is good when an infiltrator gets excited over it. And from how it sounds, Whisper just hit the metaphorical jackpot.