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What if you continued to exist after everything you ever knew was destroyed, after everything you ever loved and everything that ever loved you was dead and gone forever? What if you were forced to live in your home as it crumbles and decays around you? What would that do to you?
An unfortunate magician will find out, when the victim of these circumstances has a contemplation of his own: How far can a mare's mind bend before it breaks?
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Hmmm...
Interesting. Interesting indeed.
I shall have to track this!
This seems pretty interesting... I must know what happens next!
Liked this so far. I am interested to se where it goes next.
Also, THIRD!
Oh, very nice. Very nice indeed.
This was very well-written and eerie. You seem to have a gift for description. Im looking forward to more.
if my computer was gone... oh no.... SOMEPONY HUG ME IM SCARED D:
This is very very good. And who is this buttnoodle advertising things at the top of the page?
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guess they found out about this site now.
Damn spambots!
Anyway, this looks really, really good. I'll be lurking...
Wait... Watching. Lurking seems like the wrong word.
Thumbs and favorite, just for the sake of it
AHHHHHHHH GRINDHOUSE!!!!!!!!!!
Excellent description
Shit's getting paranormal.
"Listen! Do you smell that?"
Ah, Ghostbusters. I still love you.
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WHO YA GONNA CALL
Tch, why on earth does this story only have thirteen thumbs!? It's freaking awesome! I can't wait to see what happens to Trixie now... the things that mare will do for money, I tell you!
Ohgodnoweallgonnadiehorriblywhatisthishorribleohdearohgodohmanohgodohman.....
This is quite well built up in terms of suspense...
Brr...
Please do continue.
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Obviously because 13 is the most creepy number imaginable.
This story has not been getting the attention it deserves. Sometimes, people unfairly think that stories with only 1000 words per chapter are not good. Perhaps if you beef up your chapters people will realize that this is an excellent story.
Your descriptive imagery is incredible. God damn it.
Great.
Just for good measure: Advice: Do not read this at half past midnight. You will get spooked by any shadow.
Vivid imagery. Very.
*huddles under blanket*
Whoa... you really are the master of atmosphere!
Please continue. I wasn't planning on sleeping for the next couple of weeks anyway...
good lord
TIME FOR SILENT HILL!!!!!!
Nononononononono.....
Godangit, now I read this just before sleep.
So much for that idea.
Huh? New update?
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SPOOKED?
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Off to read!
EDIT:
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Now I feel bad for my least favorite pony.
Bitch or no, I wouldn't wish this sort of thing on my worst enemy. I'd have said "Good enough" by the end of chapter 3.
But just as deliciously creepy as ever! Keep those updates coming.
Lesson in not reading horror before bed.
Learned.
Damn. 'Dis creepy.
Poor mare can't catch a break.
I wonder what kind of resolution we can expect...
This is beginning to just be cruel and sadistic
Brilliant stuff. Got me nice and immersed with the atmosphere and really played well on the "haunted house" thing. Very classy, or perhaps classic.
Would really want to know where it leads and concludes.
Did a reading of this fic, this chapter. Gonna do more. All of them.
Come on then, Mr. Grimm, be a friend and give us the conclusion.
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I must first and foremost apologize for not replying to this comment right away. It would seem I must have cleared my inbox without noticing it, and have just now found it.
Secondly, I give you all my thanks and complete gratitude for reading this. I truly can't say how grateful I am for this. Your voice really fits the sort of tone I was going for when writing this, and they go so perfectly well together!
I am going to try to finish this, thought it may take some time because I need to retrieve the file from another computer and then need to actually begin finishing the chapter.
Thank you, ViolentlyIrrelevant. You've restored my hope in this.
Here's a reading for this chapter.
More coming eventually!
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I must have done the same, found this comment now as I posted the latest reading.
I am happy to hear you are filled with some manner of hope. It brings me hope as well :P
So now we both have a project concerning this. I'll be seeing you around.
More reading! Chapter 3 is here.
Hope someone enjoys and hang on for more.
More reading.
Still enjoying reading this fic over and over :P
By all the Gods, I do not know what kept me back. I should have done all the chapters already.
I love this fic, I love all your writing. Please continue, don't leave me, don't leave us!
A fantastic story! I can't wait for the next chapter!