The prince of a kingdom with some rather terrible news, with no shortage of curiosity and stubborn nosiness, finds himself hunting for the answers on how his parents were mysteriously killed after coming back from a diplomatic meeting.
A pony starting his new life in the big city finds himself bunking with a bunch of half insane ponies who aren't as insane as he thought. Well, they are. But what they do is actually quite impressive to say the least. And this guy just found himself right in the middle of it.
Woo! First story! This is going to come out slow as hell so I'm really sorry for making you wait, but all good things come to those who wait!
Constructive criticism is accepted and frankly encouraged. I like hearing the things I can improve on.
Plz don't bash me story though >.<
You've definitely got some great story-builders going on here, as well as plenty of room for improvement. I'm very excited to see how your writing grows as the story progresses, and though my advice will be slow, if you want any assistance, you can always PM me for me. Be prepared for harsh criticism and incredible backlash, my friend - OC stories are often sent to downvote hell. Keep your chin up, however; this is a very good story thus far, and I can't wait to see more! Good luck!