Interesting premise...not many displaced train stories out here, and what few there are are so far incomplete from what I have seen.

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Thank you. I'm glad you've liked reading it. And thank you for the track as well.

A guy coming over to Equestria with his train engine? Now that's a new one, kudos for that! I'm very interested to see where you will take this and I imagine the train will play some significance as well, though i will be damned if I can guess what. Hm ... would Equestrian rails be the right width to accommodate it? I'm sure Twilight or something could lug it through the forest if she really wanted to ... which she probably does, given it's a new toy she would be all too happy to examine with glee.

Some aspects I'm a little bit iffy on, like the guy's disturbing tendency to talk out loud all the time, and I'm not convinced than punching a timberwolf in the face repeatedly would accomplish anything other than a bruised and scratched knuckle (it's effin tree bark!), but eh - overall pretty good so far.

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Yeah, I'm still trying to get the hang of writing like this instead of my usual stories. Thank you for the feedback. I'll try and get that fixed for the next chapter.

I wonder what Twilight or for that matter, Fluttershy will say about Discords little joke :D

Another great chapter man, keep up the good work

"Well it's not every day that something like this happens."
"Something like what happens?"
"A creature such as yourself appearing in this world. That's why I was trying to prepare you."

Apparently Discord doesn't have an account on Fimfic.

So far not great but not bad ether...

I loved it, When will you de adding more?!

Yes! Another chapter! Can't wait for more!

Love this story!

Yay for another chapter!

another great chapter! looking forward to see more. hopefully nathan and the ponies dont get off on the wrong foot.

what gonna hapen next chapter?

And he shoots the flare in the middle of nowhere, where noone can see it, because HE IS IN THE MIDDLE OF NOWHERE!! Retard...stream1.gifsoup.com/view5/3126596/train-derail-o.gif

so much space!

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The only one retarded here seems to be you.

6424832 You're... supposed to fire off the flare where you're expected to be found, or, if you're moving, at the highest possible point... do you.. know how S&R works?

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Well, given that he fired it only a few paces away from a large noisy machine in which he has taken shelter...

"Fuck!" He cried out internally

how do you cry out... internally?

Enyone else have the Tomis the train song stuck in there heads ?

Dammit Discord, are you the reason there's always some sorta traffic in SoCal?

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There are ways.

Things the film "Mega Piranha" taught me.

- Never swallow a flare.