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Hey there, pretty good first chapter. Me myself always found a slight interest in locomotives, so I hope to expect some more quality chapters such as this. Tracking.
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Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.
I'll watch this with interest.
An interesting way to go that-a-way.
Was quite the loco nut when I was 6 through 14. ^^ This beginnings of story has rekindled it again, so cheers for that.
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Thank you all so much.
I am completely surprised at the reception that this story is getting so far. But I'm gonna do the best I can to keep this story as interesting as possible.
Wow. Amazing. This is one of the best stories I've read on FIMFiction so far. I can't believe how accurately you portrayed everything! As Nathan closed in on that curve, I was immediately thinking of that Southern Pacific wreck on Cajon Pass where the train derailed on a curve doing 105 and crashed into those people's backyards. It's nice to know I'm not the only train buff on FIMFiction.
One thing though (sorry, I'm a HUGE Grammar Nazi ). "Before the voice could reply, your eyes catch the speedometer on the control panel." I'm sure you meant to say "Nathan" here. Don't want any 1st/2nd person confusion. Other than that, great job! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Thank you so much for catching that.
Force of habit from writing second person stories most of the time lol
6378144 I also had a few minor difficulties when writing MY first 2nd person fic. I kept having to tell myself that I was writing in present tense rather than past, but I kept writing words like 'took', 'heard', 'climbed', etc. out of instinct.
This starts out really good, I'm excited to see some more.
Okay.. I've been looking for a story involving Locomotives, that and I've been binge watching Youtube vids of said locomotives. Track and follow.
San Bernardino eh? Not too far from where I live. I've always loved trains btw.
Oooh i like this already, so dreams for sometime, some vague ominous background reality warping entity and a portal to equestria.
I'm curious to see where this goes.
Great story so far. From a certified railroad conductor
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Thank you all so much! I'm glad to see that so many people are liking this story.
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I'm glad that the communication was realistic. Also, did you attend a special school to become certified? Because it's always been my goal in life to be an engineer for a railroad.
Wow, no offense but I thout no one could right a story about trains like this on fimfiction and it get viewed. But I'm happy to say that you sir proved me wrong. This is one of the best stories I've read in a while.
6384524 no got it when I started working for a local short line
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Thank you!
And thank you also for the fave as well.
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Hey when a story is good, it's worth it.
This is a very good story so far, and I can't wait to read more of it.
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Thank you and thanks for the fave as well!
Sd-40s are great engines...encrypted-tbn1.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcTfDr8rvmYqzGAJgLzdMSffPXLUxrrtweYZC3HJvRoVZJMxmaWn
But why not a beautiful Dash 9?encrypted-tbn2.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcS6iB1-Op8o20muxXPxZdFddZ--6GvystFAjy1vz9LHOGHauWOtxw
6424739 or the MLW M-420 donsdepot.donrossgroup.net/dr1007/man642.jpg
Interesting. I do love me some trains.
But this line
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Crazy train spotters, buying Train Simulator 2012, watching Rail Wars...
Someone get Spirit Tracks Link up in here.
Who else immediately searched SD40-2 on Google as soon as it popped up?
I felt a bit happy seeing San Bernardino mentioned on FiMFic...most people default to Los Angeles or San Diego when thinking of SoCal.
Trains are groovy, and I like that the human protagonist has a bit of an off-beat profession.
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lol me (i was already trying to find the train by searching up its engine number 🤣)
a union pacific SD 40 is not complete without its freight and oil cars