I'm just here to write stories, make everyone happy, and let everyone know they are all awesome! Have a great day! (Now on Wattpad @Flutterbat276)
It's the Summer Sun Dance at the Equestrian High School. Two ponies, both lost in the night, waltz under the starlit sky.
WARNING: VERY sad!!
Based on a comment from Ponyphonics "Starlight Waltz"! Thank you, River Melody, for this VERY unique idea and for letting me base this story off of it! You're a creative GENIUS!
HERE'S THE SONG!
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This was all I could think when I heard that line
6418172 all I see is "my tail" STUPID TINY PHONE SCREEN! Wait...lemme try sideways. Nope. I see a face now though
Oh derp! Just save the image and look at it! XD
Nice job with the Story so far! I can't wait for the next Chapter! :D
6418581 LOL it was your idea! I just made it happen! I love to write stories and I couldn't help but write a story since that YouTube comment! Thanks for letting me use it! You're awesome!
6418717 no problem! I can't wait to see the finished result! And who knows, maybe I'll write my own version! (So it would be me getting inspired by you when you were inspired by me... Inspiration everywhere
URGHHH, GET TO THE SAD PART! I didn't draw fanart to watch them take a test! (Crappy fanart, but still) JK, I'm enjoying this.
I am excited for the next chapter though! Hopefully the big dance goes well for them.
besides the whole sad part though
6421855 XD I'm planning on having the Friday be another filler, but the one after is getting them on the way. Unless I skip Friday which I can do. Glad that you're enjoying it though!
You drew fanart? XD yay!
FINALLY this is out! HAPPY ZOETIC ZEBRA!! YA HAPPY!!
People are drawing fan art for this idea? I'm touched (even though I'm not the one actually writing the fanfiction XD). I'm planning on making my own story as well, but In the mean time riddle me this:
If you started a story on my idea first, but I start my own story on my idea after yours, which one is the original story?
I expect an answer and a reason why in a day or so. Good luck ;-)
6425897 I guess both? Maybe? I don't know XD it's like "what came first? The chicken or the egg?" It just depends on how you look at it
6426922 lol, yea. I've finished the rough draft of my version, now I just need to edit it and write it on the computer. I'll give you early access to it so that you can tell me what you think of it. It's a lot shorted than your version- only a chapter long. I'm pretty proud of it so far though.
Also, how do you post a story here? I've never posted one XD
Though I might post it on Fanfiction.net, since it's not very pony related.
6427860 type it, then hit submit. Wait for approval! If it's not approved, then someone sends an automated message telling you why, then you gotta fix the problems. Voila! A story on here!
6428615 Okie doki, thanks! I'll share it with you in a couple of days, and if you're interested I could use help on a cover art for it. I don't have any ideas for it :P.
6428685 ok sure! if you wanna, just save to google docs and email me the doc (minerchord99@gmail.com) cant WAIT to see what youve done!
Also I'd be happy to do coverart! Just credit me for it XD
COMPLETE!! Yay! But THE FEELS!
ITS UP!!!!! FINALLY IT IS UP
6441904 I SAW!
(Imma link urs to my desc so people can see it)
The way you ended it killed it for me you should have just ended with them flying away to heaven but other than that ig was good.
A lovely story! it has a beautiful romance since my oc's love story as well has to do with dance, hence my name Dance Cloud.
But 1 thing just always gets me annoyed when looking back here and it's the ending. There is no detail and a bit lack of sadness in my opinion. Don't get me wrong, it is sad their child died but just all of a sudden? I'd love to know what happened the moment before. What was Mint's condition that lead to the consequence? What was Diamond and Mint thinking before the baby arrived? What did the baby look like? Ending the story just with the news of a dead child just didn't trigger that sad emotion to me unfortunately.
I hope you consider my opinion and will us it in any other stories u have
6585239 what baby? Anyways, I didn't put the condition because I didn't know what kind of condition would happen normally in such situations. I'm actually just reaching the end of my drivers ed course, so now I know a bit more. But thanks for the advise!
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I believe that was the part about the baby.... I might be wrong about what I'm thinking there but hey, at least this was definitely a story worth remembering! XD
6587047 oh. The "children" are Diamond and Mint. Sorry if that caused any confusion
Hey uh...for anyone who wants to read a really sad story, I got one on Wattpad. I even cried reading over it. My writing style has improved DRASTICALLY since this was written and I think y'all may like it? If you like 2nd person and Undertale. That's all I've really written on Wattpad tbh XD I know this could have been WAY better, but I just didn't have that concept of writing a sad fic. I can do it effectively now and I even got people really crying. If you wanna check it out, the link is here. Hope y'all had a happy Easter!